Holistic education is essential in the sustainable development of every country. It is a philosophy of education based on the premise that each person finds the identity, meaning, and purpose in life through connections to the community, to the natural world, and to humanitarian values such as compassion and peace. One of the developed notions, yet under observation, is to make it compulsory for high school students to do some programmes, of course, charity ones, to assist their community.
First and foremost, contribute to promoting the society is one of the primary duties of a righteous and positive member. Moreover, strike while the iron is hot; the secondary student, who is striving to carve out a personal identity, need to be brought to the knowledge of civilisation by involvement in community activities. Thanks for such service, students have more opportunities to improve their communication skills by contacting with others from distinguishing culture, distinct locations, also teamwork skills. Be aware of taking social responsibility supports children to round out their personalities and get a more realistic view of life. These knowledge learned by doing non-profits services are valuable experiences either their career expertise or tertiary education.
In another hand, the idea of compulsory charity does not seem right. It needs a combination education system in theory and reality to make children understand humanitarianism. It's encouraged that helping people who have plights, not only children learn how to share and sympathise but also gain their respect towards people from all backgrounds.
In conclusion, children have rights to have the full flourish included heart, mind, and body. Unpaid community service is a smart program to give our children best development.
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 73
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give o 56
- Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmers (for example working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children).To what extent do you agree or disagree?Give r 84
- Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities. Others, however, say that this would have little effect on public health and that other measures are required. Discuss both these views and give o 56
- Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary school rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages? 70
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 657, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this knowledge' or 'These knowledges'?
Suggestion: This knowledge; These knowledges
... and get a more realistic view of life. These knowledge learned by doing non-profits services a...
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Line 7, column 152, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[4]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'children the best'.
Suggestion: children the best
...service is a smart program to give our children best development.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, moreover, second, so, while, in conclusion, of course, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57039711191 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13766390336 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 184.0 176.041082164 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.664259927798 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 481.5 506.74238477 95% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.1054137407 49.4020404114 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 118.692307692 106.682146367 111% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.3076923077 20.7667163134 103% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.46153846154 7.06120827912 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.160040305736 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0499471343224 0.084324248473 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0503407522037 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0909376328793 0.151304729494 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0171624994802 0.056905535591 30% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.5 13.0946893788 118% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.03 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.69 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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