Public health care is always at the very forefront of the world preoccupation. One of the promising, yet not fully understood, approach is to build up fitness facilities. With this, residents' healthiness can be increased through sports promotion. However, some people believe that installing sports facilities brings very little value.
Firstly, to quote the famous saying, “A healthy mind in a healthy body”, it is known that exercising is an excellent way to stay well. Since the availability of the sports equipment can facilitate physical activities, it can contribute significantly to people’s well-being. Moreover, it also supports people who can not afford to pay for gymnastics centres or physical training courses.
However, there are many factors affect residents' health such as reducing pollution, insurance policies, food hygiene, etc. For instance, people living in rural parts of my country have to do physical works day by day, yet their health condition is very poor. Lack of proper medical facilities, malnutrition and pollution are the leading causes of many health problems. Minor ailments such as diarrhoea, which can be easily cured with proper cares, can be seriously dangerous to these people, even lethal.
In conclusion, although the staying active is an essential part of human health, it does not guarantee a person’s well-being. We need a public health care policy which is practical and comprehensive instead of patchy methods.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 176, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...tay well. Since the availability of the sports equipment can facilitate physical activ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, moreover, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 13.1623246493 106% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 11.0 24.0651302605 46% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1261.0 1615.20841683 78% => OK
No of words: 227.0 315.596192385 72% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.5550660793 5.12529762239 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.88156143495 4.20363070211 92% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.00860739376 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 155.0 176.041082164 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.68281938326 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 372.6 506.74238477 74% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.5095347647 49.4020404114 48% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 97.0 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.4615384615 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.38461538462 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.195066777362 0.244688304435 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0677719071942 0.084324248473 80% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0413069202261 0.0667982634062 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115934864335 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567899556978 0.056905535591 100% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.67 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.7 8.58950901804 113% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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