Some people believe that unpaid community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes( for example, working for charity, improving the neighborhood or teaching sports to the younger children) to what extent do you agree?
It is often considered by some that, high school students education chart should be included the free of cost community services. Such as, charity works, enhance the neighbor's livelihood and educate lower class student's regarding sports and so on. However, in this essay agree with the statement because, such services would lead the students become more aware about surrounding people and flourish humanity and civility to the core.
On the one hand, students are the next citizens in the nation. In brief, encourage students to do certain kind of charity works to overcome poverty, and seeking medical attention. As well as, doing some services to eradicate some sort of pollution and take tuition classes for lower class students may emerging matter of kindness. Students who practice such things in the high school age would be able to manage next generation community in well manner. That would lead to good politicians and community workers in the future. By the help of teachers this type of services makes up students attitude towards the nation and all category of people. For example, In India, service week in October effectively managed by school authority and have a mesmerize memory of each students like me.
Similarly, students who got a chance to work with other social service group during the compulsory service program would be a better experiments of them. Since, social services may enhance students helping mentality and sharing bahavior to some extent. Furthermore, such compulsory services make involvement of all students and able to know the nation deeply and taking care sincerely in future. For instance, a famous social worker explain in TED talks the inspiration of his works based on his school age experience.
To sum up, unavoidable matter of community services in the teenagers would makes up real gentleman and humanity workers for the forthcoming era. Thereby, continuous practice of social service would be encouraging things of students in high school level.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'neighbors'' or 'neighbor's'?
Suggestion: neighbors'; neighbor's
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Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'students'' or 'student's'?
Suggestion: students'; student's
...teachers this type of services makes up students attitude towards the nation and all cat...
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Message: Did you mean: 'in the future'?
Suggestion: in the future
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Message: The verb 'would' requires the base form of the verb: 'make'
Suggestion: make
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nagers would makes up real gentleman and humanity workers for the forthcoming era...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, however, may, regarding, similarly, so, well, for example, for instance, in brief, kind of, sort of, such as, as well as, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 41.998997996 121% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25856697819 5.12529762239 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61565394473 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.554517133956 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 533.7 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.4841058877 49.4020404114 60% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.0625 20.7667163134 97% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.0 7.06120827912 127% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.01903807615 120% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.67935871743 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.227476494022 0.244688304435 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0780990750178 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0430160001871 0.0667982634062 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.148399625861 0.151304729494 98% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0142214152182 0.056905535591 25% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.4 13.0946893788 102% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 42.72 50.2224549098 85% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.23 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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