It is believed that volunteer community service should be a compulsory part of high school programmes, some examples are working for a charity, improving the neighbourhood or teaching sports to younger children. This essay completely agrees with this statement because the benefits to students are noteworthy. This essay will have a look on what skills are developed by volunteering at community service and continue to talk about how these so-called soft skills are valuable for finding a job or getting in the college of the student choice.
Education does not only pursuits to storage knowledge at the pupils’ head but to make a human being suitable for working and living in the community. By volunteering soft skills as emotional management, empathy or resilience are improved. Those skills made yourself a suitable person o work with and to study with. Because no matter how good you are in a field if you are unable to cooperate and accomplish a task in a team you will be dysfunctional.
Based on my experience, being president of a charity club, made me realize how valuable this experience is for the employers. Every time I had an interview I got asked about my role in the club and what lessons have I learnt from it. However, is not only in the industry where this experience is considered. If you want to get access to a renowned college it would be taken into account too.
In conclusion, teenagers in high school should be concerned about their communities. Seeing unpaid work is not exclusively a heart-warming activity, on the contrary, it’s one key activity to learn and develop themselves.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 309, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, look, so, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1359.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 272.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.99632352941 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.96435490088 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 164.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.602941176471 0.561755894193 107% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 48.913642051 49.4020404114 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.538461538 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.9230769231 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.46153846154 7.06120827912 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315415050762 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0993815230289 0.084324248473 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.164923168856 0.0667982634062 247% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.166868282655 0.151304729494 110% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.117471628922 0.056905535591 206% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.6 13.0946893788 96% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.92 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.0 9.78957915832 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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