some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, the tourist industry is growing tremendously all over the world. As tourism is sharing huge amount to country revenue generation. It is considered by many that tourists should follow the local customs and behaviors while others argued that the host country should accept the cultural diversity. In my opinion, the host country should not impose any restriction on tourists and it should respect all type of cultures equally.
On one hand, visitors should accept the regional rules and customs because if they follow local culture and traditions then it will be easy to accommodate with local people. Secondly, tourists enjoy more trips and get more information about local rule and regulations. Thirdly, some positive aspect of local culture might be beneficial for their own country also. Fourthly, local citizens will be more friendly and happier if guests will follow their culture. Lastly, some people think that if they exposed to foreigners culture then the value of local culture will be decreased.
on the other hand, it is essential to accept variability of culture and traditions politely since it will consolidate the country popularity for tourism. Moreover, the visitors come to spend valuable time in other countries and they do not want to follow different type local cultures. Similarly, local people help them by welcoming them with their own culture and it makes the feeling of safety and security within visitors.
Furthermore, exchange of culture between tourists and local people might increase closeness among various countries. At the same time, local people also have an opportunity to get familiar with foreign cultures and behaviors. In addition, it decreases the conflicts among local citizen and tourists if tourist allowed following any culture according to their wish.
To conclude, to enhance further tourism and to prove a country the best place for tourist then the country should accept all types of cultural and behaviors variability.
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Discourse Markers used:
['also', 'furthermore', 'if', 'lastly', 'moreover', 'second', 'secondly', 'similarly', 'so', 'then', 'third', 'thirdly', 'while', 'as to', 'in addition', 'in my opinion', 'on the other hand']
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance in Part of Speech:
Nouns: 0.268221574344 0.247107183377 109% => OK
Verbs: 0.134110787172 0.155533422707 86% => OK
Adjectives: 0.110787172012 0.0946595960268 117% => OK
Adverbs: 0.0437317784257 0.0501214627716 87% => OK
Pronouns: 0.0495626822157 0.0437548338989 113% => OK
Prepositions: 0.113702623907 0.122226691241 93% => OK
Participles: 0.0204081632653 0.0403226058552 51% => OK
Conjunctions: 2.60088231154 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Infinitives: 0.0320699708455 0.0326793684256 98% => OK
Particles: 0.0 0.00163938923432 0% => OK
Determiners: 0.0728862973761 0.0861772015684 85% => OK
Modal_auxiliary: 0.0379008746356 0.021408717616 177% => OK
WH_determiners: 0.0 0.011925033212 0% => Some subClauses wanted starting by 'Which, Who, What, Whom, Whose.....'
Vocabulary words and sentences:
No of characters: 1989.0 1933.35771543 103% => OK
No of words: 313.0 316.048096192 99% => OK
Chars per words: 6.35463258786 6.12580529183 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.20616286096 4.20517956788 100% => OK
words length more than 5 chars: 0.428115015974 0.374742101984 114% => OK
words length more than 6 chars: 0.341853035144 0.28420135186 120% => OK
words length more than 7 chars: 0.217252396166 0.203846283523 107% => OK
words length more than 8 chars: 0.130990415335 0.137316102897 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.60088231154 2.80594681477 93% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.037074148 93% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.520766773163 0.56093040696 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
Word variations: 53.4288611077 60.7387585426 88% => OK
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0891783567 99% => OK
Sentence length: 19.5625 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 32.3436141301 49.517814964 65% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.3125 127.492653851 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5625 20.7743622355 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.0625 0.814263465372 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38877755511 114% => OK
Language errors: 11.0 3.99599198397 275% => Correct essay format wanted or double check grammar & spelling issues after essay writing.
Readability: 53.7478035144 49.1944974215 109% => OK
Elegance: 1.76923076923 1.69124875643 105% => OK
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.422695183743 0.332605444948 127% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence: 0.11657456553 0.102741220458 113% => OK
Sentence sentence coherence SD: 0.0658110166934 0.0668466124924 98% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence: 0.586394367065 0.534860350844 110% => OK
Sentence paragraph coherence SD: 0.155806413964 0.148594505496 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165753907223 0.134430193775 123% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0859863405386 0.0742795772207 116% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence: 0.293607412184 0.324371583561 91% => OK
Paragraph paragraph coherence SD: 0.088138880333 0.0638462369009 138% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.269765792546 0.228012699653 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.044016338658 0.058150111329 76% => The ideas may be duplicated in paragraphs.
Task Achievement:
Sentences with positive sentiment : 16.0 8.68436873747 184% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.41683366733 0% => More neutral sentences wanted.
Positive topic words: 14.0 5.90881763527 237% => OK
Negative topic words: 0.0 2.5751503006 0% => More negative topic words wanted.
Neutral topic words: 0.0 1.9629258517 0% => More neutral topic words wanted.
Total topic words: 14.0 10.4468937876 134% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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