When visiting other countries, some people believe that the host country should welcome cultural differences, while I shall emphasize the importance of following local customs and behavior.
First, liberating Muslim female from the veil remains a considerably complex affair. Yet until now, it’s dangerous for women, even foreign women, to hang out without the veil in Iran. Thus in extreme cases, compliance with local behavior is for security considerations.
Secondly, following local customs shows the most basic respect to people who call the territory you visit home. For instance, we all know that it’s rude to enter one’s home in Japan with shoes on without permission. And if you’d like to learn more about it, you will possibly find out that Japanese used to adopt wooden structure to prevent houses from frequent earthquakes. At the same time, it rains a lot in Japan. Preventing the mud from being brought into rooms, in case they could better protect wooden floors, they took off shoes before entering. So while appreciating wonderful sceneries and nice foods, one can gain a better understanding of customs and culture from locals’ habits, isn’t that one of the purposes of tourism?
Of course the inconvenience of adapting oneself to others’ behavior cannot be denied. And it’s considered limiting cultural interaction by a great deal of people, to some extent. From my perspective, however, cultural exchanges must be based on respecting cultural differences all the time, not to mention when paying a visit. Just as there are similar old sayings in many areas-when in Rome, do as the Romans do, for it is exact the tiny, nonnegligible differences that have added up to a colorful world.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
..., to hang out without the veil in Iran. Thus in extreme cases, compliance with local...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, however, if, second, secondly, so, thus, while, for instance, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1477.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 278.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.31294964029 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08329915638 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.86119594106 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 191.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.687050359712 0.561755894193 122% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.1965725209 49.4020404114 87% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.5 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8571428571 20.7667163134 96% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.57142857143 7.06120827912 79% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179390030592 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0630298759702 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121268529187 0.0667982634062 182% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159489977 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.186935047077 0.056905535591 329% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.52 12.4159519038 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.12 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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