Some people believe getting married before completing school or getting employed is not a wise option. I completely agree with this statement
Marriage is not a small thing in my view. it is the thing which remains with us for lifetime as a symbol of happiness and marriage before school is obviously not a good option because children's still don't know the real meaning and real responsibilities of marriage. similarlly, they are too small to handle such a big responsibility.
However, marriage create an extend way to change the peoples life because their are lots of new relationship made and handling those relationship is a tough thing. for instance, without employment marriage cannot be taken as a happy marriage because without employment husband and wife cannot fulfill they needs or they families need. For example my Cousin sister who get married before her schooling, she is not living a happy life nowadays because she dosen't have a ability and experience on how to make her husband and her family happy.
To conclude, i believe marriage before school or before job has a very negative impact on persons life but eventually marriage after job and school is a good option for numerous and prosperous Life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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...efore job has a very negative impact on persons life but eventually marriage after job ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, so, still, for example, for instance, in my view
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 41.998997996 48% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1023.0 1615.20841683 63% => OK
No of words: 204.0 315.596192385 65% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01470588235 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77926670891 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75521158682 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 176.041082164 69% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.598039215686 0.561755894193 106% => OK
syllable_count: 324.9 506.74238477 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 16.0721442886 50% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 55.5111193816 49.4020404114 112% => OK
Chars per sentence: 127.875 106.682146367 120% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.5 20.7667163134 123% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.25 7.06120827912 117% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.1588882409 0.244688304435 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0753061587038 0.084324248473 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0863852522756 0.0667982634062 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.122947073631 0.151304729494 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0798185105145 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 13.0946893788 114% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 41.0 78.4519038076 52% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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