Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Other disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Nowadays, traveling to other countries with different cultures have been increased. It is often happened for tourists to be obliged to follow their host people’s customs. However, some people think that is not true and host people should accept difference in
customs. I do believe that it is necessary for a tourist to get familiar with
his or her host country culture and try to follow them as people of that
country.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"> Firstly, the purpose of tourism industry in
all the world is to close people with different cultures more and more together
and try to remove what that makes them to feel discrimination. If a visitor does
not follow his or her host people customs, it can be had negative effects on
people’s behavior and they may feel more difference between themselves and
other country. For example, some customs reference to religion and if a tourist
with a different religion does not respect them, host people think that the tourist
dose not respect their religion and resulting more serious problems.<o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">Secondly, making a tourist familiar
with cultures and customs of a country is so far easier than making large
groups of people familiar with different cultures of visitors. However, it is
needed for governments, especially those who want to attract more and more tourist,
to teach their people how to response when they see actions by visitors which
are different with their customs and encourage them to avoid from violent
responses. <o:p></o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify"><o:p> </o:p></p>
<p class="MsoNormal" style="text-align:justify">In overall, I believe that it would be better and more efficient if tourists try to follow local customs and believes. However, people in countries, with high potential to attract tourist,
should learn how to response difference in cultures.<o:p></o:p></p>
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, for example
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 10.4138276553 144% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2074.0 1615.20841683 128% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 6.9364548495 5.12529762239 135% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 8.31883176507 2.80592935109 296% => Word_Length_SD is high.
Unique words: 142.0 176.041082164 81% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.47491638796 0.561755894193 85% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 557.1 506.74238477 110% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.9 1.60771543086 118% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 168.886549691 49.4020404114 342% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 230.444444444 106.682146367 216% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 33.2222222222 20.7667163134 160% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.44444444444 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 24.0 4.38176352705 548% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.12921039652 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0916501797779 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0508645019023 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.053448419746 0.151304729494 35% => Maybe some paragraphs are off the topic.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0607968295063 0.056905535591 107% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 27.9 13.0946893788 213% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 12.6 50.2224549098 25% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 11.3001002004 174% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 23.56 12.4159519038 190% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.55 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.78957915832 148% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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