Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behaviour. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
It is undeniable that in recent years, the tourism industry witnessed the significant development and the worldwide expansion. While some people say that foreign travellers should comply with domestic practices and attitudes, I would argue that the cultural discrepancy should be respectful.
On the one hand, when tourists visit any interesting places, they are advised to abide by culture and customs of the regions where they travel. The first reason for this is that the visitors can become tactless and be opposed by the local inhabitants. For instance, there is the dress code to visit some attractions, such as temples, mosques and some other places of worship in many countries. Take Malaysia as an example, when visitors visit some Muslim mosques, the women are required to wear hijab to visit place of worship. Besides that, due to some religious regulations, some kinds of food and dishes may be restricted in some nations, the visitors should search these types of information to have a good preparation for their trips.
On the other hand, the culture of foreign tourists from various nations should be respected by the domestic people. It is due to own regulations and controls of some religions. For example, the Christians must do a sign of the cross before eating, it is so strange for the inhabitants in some other countries and areas, however, it is their customs and should be appreciated by the locals. The next reason is that the cultural integration plays a crucial part of globalization, so the residents should welcome and accept the culture differences. The adaption of these discrepancy enables the local residents to be well-prepared about the food, the places of worship, types of entertainment and so on to serve the global visitors.
In conclusion, there are convincing arguments both for and against the cultủal differences between the foreign visitors and the local residents, but I believe that the integration of culture is essential to develop the tourism industry worldwide.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 563, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this discrepancy' or 'these discrepancies'?
Suggestion: this discrepancy; these discrepancies
...he culture differences. The adaption of these discrepancy enables the local residents to be well-...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, however, if, may, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1696.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 327.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.18654434251 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25242769721 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87755071923 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 172.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.525993883792 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 522.9 506.74238477 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 9.0 2.52805611222 356% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 20.2975951904 123% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 48.4138959953 49.4020404114 98% => OK
Chars per sentence: 130.461538462 106.682146367 122% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.1538461538 20.7667163134 121% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.53846153846 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.275815613929 0.244688304435 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0902409511268 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500578532369 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15416075098 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0554050823601 0.056905535591 97% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.6 13.0946893788 119% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 50.2224549098 92% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 11.3001002004 115% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.27 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 10.1190380762 119% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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