Some people believe that visitors to other countries should follow local customs and behavior. Others disagree and think that the host country should welcome cultural differences. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Nowadays, most of the countries especially which have had rich civilization, have welcomed lots of visitors from various countries. During these years, some native people believe foreigners should pursue their cultural dresses and manner while others think the visited country should be open to all different personalities and appearances. I myself believe the host country does not have the right to force visitors how to dress or behave.
The first group of local people who think about tourists following their old habits like looks or manner would have several reasons. Using their cultural customs by visitors not only could indicate to youngsters about their history, but also would show tourist’s respect to local people and the place which have been visited. Moreover, because of their insistence to their cultural traditions to be comprehended by visitors, they have always like to their old habits to be followed. Also, this has led their streets to become spectacular. Consequently, stimulating people to read more about their olden times have been their significant point of having this type of belief.
On the other hand, the others whom do not feel satisfied to impose foreigners to be similar to their ancestors have their own explanations. These people, who I have completely concurred with, think visitors have come to other countries to see various kind of culture. Therefore, if they have been enforced to do whatever something they have found inane, they would definitely resist following it. As a result, the host country would become one horrible destination for people who have wanted to visit it. And secondly, the visited country should designate their old heritage including culture, so it has not been tourist’s responsibility to be aware of their history.
In conclusion, however some native people have thought about pursuing their historical habits by foreign visitors, others including myself have not had this kind of opinion which could make tourists uncomfortable and feeling unwelcome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, look, moreover, second, secondly, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1717.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 319.0 315.596192385 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.38244514107 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.22617688928 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69763378068 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 173.0 176.041082164 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.542319749216 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 527.4 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 44.3906590652 49.4020404114 90% => OK
Chars per sentence: 122.642857143 106.682146367 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.7857142857 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.0714285714 7.06120827912 157% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.221049680032 0.244688304435 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0928699365792 0.084324248473 110% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0740675461365 0.0667982634062 111% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16108703863 0.151304729494 106% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0972518600485 0.056905535591 171% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.22 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 8.58950901804 101% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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