Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.
Throughout the time of human’s life, everyone has confronted many difficulties. Under those circumstance, while some people have wanted to alter their life and have always recognized them as promotions, others do not like to take a risk so they would keep themselves away from any changes. I myself have approximate view between these statements.
First of all, although everybody has had many ups and downs during their life, modifying conditions have been the hardest thing for individuals. Moreover, this changing case has indicated not only people’s courage but also their power. As a result, human-beings whom have had adverse thoughts about risking their life by changing it such as fear of disability to overcome their stress or losing their current position, would make them not to take a chance of altering their habits. But controlling lives by not make changes could not be possible. That is for the reason of a significant point which should be mentioned here which is the fact that if people cannot alter their life, it does not mean theirs would be stable forever.
On the other hand, changing life’s conditions have been an interesting duty for other humans. In their opinion, the main concept of life is variation which could not be denied. But in fact all the changes could not be called as successful promotion. Consequently, there are some alteration which have been imposed to people such as losing their job or money. Therefore, alteration have been mentioned as an inseparable point of human’s life but some of them may enforced people to go backwards instead of better conditions.
In conclusion, people especially mature ones have been skeptical of altering their life. And I myself have always been fond of making big modifications in life. But because of the fact which all the alterations have not been improvements, being careful of what are the reality of actions have been necessary.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, while, in conclusion, in fact, such as, as a result, first of all, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1616.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 317.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.09779179811 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21953715646 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.74355472291 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555205047319 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 496.8 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 4.0 0.809619238477 494% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9982599157 49.4020404114 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 106.682146367 95% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.8125 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.170847719096 0.244688304435 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0693992607271 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0369765581573 0.0667982634062 55% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111195040875 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0464048068777 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.3 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.12 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 71.0 78.4519038076 91% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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