Some people believe that young peop who comit seriuos crimes should be punished in the same way as adutls. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In recent years, the juvenile delinquency rate is increasing globally. To prevent this status, some people claim that minors should be punished as adults would be. From my point of view, I strongly disagree with stronger punishments applying to young offenders. In this essay, I will try to demonstrate reasons why people support heavier sentences and state my viewpoints.
To begin with, while the leniency of law makes youngsters underestimating the seriousness of committing a crime, some individuals might think stronger punishments are efficient ways to decline juvenile delinquency rate, which causing fear to wrong doers. Besides that, it is possible that adults can manipulate and persuade young people to commit a crime thanks to the less impact regarding the punishments for youngsters.
However, there are more effective alternative methods to decrease crime rate in young people. For instance, concentrating on education about crime within families and social is one of the permanent ways. Juveniles are impulsive and easy to imitate actions that they might watch on televisions and the internet. Hence, juveniles, who do not have mature thought, are easy to break the law without considering its after consequences. Lenient punishments give young people another chance to correct their behaviours and start a new life that more useful to the community. Regarding manipulation, policeman and courts have the responsibility to clarify every aspect of a crime; therefore, every offender will take appropriate punishments.
In conclusion, I believe that every crime should have appropriate sentences. However, because of the different natures between youngsters and adults, they should not be punished in the same way.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
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Message: Did you mean 'change'?
Suggestion: change
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, hence, however, if, regarding, so, therefore, while, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, in the same way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 18.0 24.0651302605 75% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalization wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1473.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 264.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57954545455 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03089032464 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9922204572 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.640151515152 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 458.1 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Interrogative: 1.0 0.384769539078 260% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.76152304609 189% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.7339801327 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.214285714 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8571428571 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.64285714286 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.274213265217 0.244688304435 112% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0826071922298 0.084324248473 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0618818387247 0.0667982634062 93% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.164220880021 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0422212855803 0.056905535591 74% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.3 13.0946893788 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.75 50.2224549098 89% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.08 12.4159519038 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.