It is maintained that entertainment content is achieved the attention of youngsters than a historical one. From my perspective, I would be believed that this trend can be attributed to a whole host of factors.
With regard of factors, I am of the opinion that the rapid growth of technology is the primary reason. In the digital age, the majority of the latest new are revolved about well-known people or International and Vietnam showbiz. For this reason, those who spend a part of their leisure time surfing the web tend to be consumed and affected by these new of famous people. Additionally, the more interesting a show is, the more audiences it has. It is an apparent fact that, not only adolescents but also nearly everyone is delighted in funny and relaxing content more than historical one which considers as a boring content as well. Consequently, with a view to owning an eye-catching style and being a modern person, the young generation prefers searching for the biology of a famous fashionista or movie stars to famous people in the past.
As has been outlined above, there are various reasons contribute to the “forget historical person” issue. By dint of addressing this, the following feasible solutions should be taken into account. Firstly, producers could allocate more money in documentary movies to change audiences’ views. It is indisputable that most of the citizens have difficulty reading a whole historical biology due to its non-interest content. If we hope there is an increase in the number of audiences, we have to make it become more attractive. Secondly, after producing these types of film, marketing aspects should be broadened it on the Internet and social media so that this content will achieve public attention more. Finally, the government and school might be organized programs or lessons related to history for the youngster in order to remind them of the bravest hero of our countries who has been gone to replace the peaceful and independent life today.
Taking everything into consideration, the young generation needed to put more of an emphasis on historical content to take pride in our heroic country and our superheroes.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 646, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... a boring content as well. Consequently, with a view to owning an eye-catching st...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, finally, first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 49.0 41.998997996 117% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1822.0 1615.20841683 113% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.07520891365 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.92334491372 2.80592935109 104% => OK
Unique words: 219.0 176.041082164 124% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.610027855153 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 581.4 506.74238477 115% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.743816436 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.875 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.4375 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 7.06120827912 71% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.234290327742 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0631392139126 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554752129392 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.121786367729 0.151304729494 80% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0699172080369 0.056905535591 123% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.7 13.0946893788 105% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.48 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.17 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 78.4519038076 129% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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