Some people believe that young people should spend their free time with family rather than go to entertainment activities outside the house. Some disagree. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
In this modern era, the thinking of youngsters has changed than it was in the past. Some people support that free time should be spent for families, whereas others argue. This essay will analyze both views and give my opinion.
On the one hand, some people believe that youths should spend their time with families probably because time is limited and valuable. Specifically, humans are older and older, including their parents, who can get sick anytime. Therefore, young people should take advantage of the time to show gratitude to their parents.
On the other hand, although family is one of the most important parts of a human’s life, there are some arguments that the younger should also have experiences in reality by outside activities. Hanging out with friends is a point of a case. Therefore, children can not only learn social skills from their friends but also acquire knowledge from some awkward situations in society. Moreover, entertainment activities outside the house are opportunities to relax and try something new, which are important to find the implications of their soul.
From my perspective, both are essential for the growth of a child. If the children pay too much attention to the surroundings, they will not have enough time for their families. On the contrary, if younger people do not have experience with others, they may have difficulty in improving their own skills.
In conclusion, time for families and friends should be balanced. Youngsters can not complete themselves if one of them is lacking.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n the one hand, some people believe that youths should spend their time with fami...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, whereas, in conclusion, on the contrary, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 41.998997996 79% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1296.0 1615.20841683 80% => OK
No of words: 252.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.14285714286 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98428260373 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6923718564 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 149.0 176.041082164 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.59126984127 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 389.7 506.74238477 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.2479763813 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 86.4 106.682146367 81% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.86666666667 7.06120827912 97% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.371985033537 0.244688304435 152% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.106131443672 0.084324248473 126% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.087002921837 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.177878303497 0.151304729494 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0793243742404 0.056905535591 139% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.24 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.31 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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