Some people claim that it is a good idea to fall in love in college. But in fact, what people fail to realize is dating at the age of a student can have a number of disadvantages.
Firstly, one might the most critical object here is that the Young may suffer from serious health problems such as autism, depression,... or even affect their spiritual life. So what is the reason why? The reasons are suggested only by some strange or suspicious words or gestures of their lover that are the symbol leading to break up.
Secondly, Spend too much time on caring and taking care of the girl or boy friend, as a result students have no time for studying and having experiences in college. The student can not pay attention to the curriculum as a result the Young age may get low grade or even out of university degree
Finally, lack of life experience and sexual knowlege, The girl friend may have unplanned pregnant, therefore the teenager would take huge of stress and pressure from family and surrounding relationship.
In conclusion, Beside fall in love in college not only give the student more motivation, inspiration in learning and working, but also love experience before getting married. To say in another word, loving at the age of being a student has some serious consequences as mentioned above information.
Thus, teacher at university and other school levels in general shoud provide more important sexual information at extra lesson for their student to understand about the gender before getting married.
Some people claim that it is a good idea to fall in love in college. But in fact, what people fail to realize is dating at the age of a student can have a number of disadvantages.
Firstly, one might the most critical object here is that the Young may suffer from serious health problems such as autism, depression,... or even affect their spiritual life. So what is the reason why? The reasons are suggested only by some strange or suspicious words or gestures of their lover that are the symbol leading to break up.
Secondly, Spend too much time on caring and taking care of the girl or boy friend, as a result students have no time for studying and having experiences in college. The student can not pay attention to the curriculum as a result the Young age may get low grade or even out of university degree
Finally, lack of life experience and sexual knowlege, The girl friend may have unplanned pregnant, therefore the teenager would take huge of stress and pressure from family and surrounding relationship.
In conclusion, Beside fall in love in college not only give the student more motivation, inspiration in learning and working, but also love experience before getting married. To say in another word, loving at the age of being a student has some serious consequences as mentioned above information.
Thus, teacher at university and other school levels in general shoud provide more important sexual information at extra lesson for their student to understand about the gender before getting married.
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- It is a popular belief that Banking and Finance is a good career so they are especially interested in universities that train this major such as the English for Banking and Finance program of BA While this issue is adverse to some extent I am a strong adv 61
- Many students often say that there are three things they must do at least once in college fail the exam get a scholarship and have a lover Many people believe that falling in love in college is not a good idea but I disagree During their four years of col 73
- Love is a necessary flavor in life and no matter how beautiful or painful it is it is still worth cherishing and keeping And college education is the most beautiful YOUth of all student love is extremely beneficial since it allows students to grow up have 67
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 134, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...alth problems such as autism, depression,... or even affect their spiritual life. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, first, firstly, if, may, second, secondly, so, therefore, thus, in conclusion, in fact, in general, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 7.0 24.0651302605 29% => OK
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1276.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 258.0 315.596192385 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.94573643411 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.00778971557 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.6842757343 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.608527131783 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 399.6 506.74238477 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 5.43587174349 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.809619238477 371% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 81.4617488698 49.4020404114 165% => OK
Chars per sentence: 116.0 106.682146367 109% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.4545454545 20.7667163134 113% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.7272727273 7.06120827912 180% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.410974583814 0.244688304435 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.147053510882 0.084324248473 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.147047631771 0.0667982634062 220% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.195081376079 0.151304729494 129% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.200326608512 0.056905535591 352% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 56.59 50.2224549098 113% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.73 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.08 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 78.4519038076 69% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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