Some people claim that not enough of the waste from homes is recycled. They say that the only way to increase recycling is for governments to make it a legal requirement.
To what extent do you think laws are needed to make people recycle more of their waste?
It is true that environmental pollution are increasing in all over the world because the rubbish was disposed from homes. Many people believe that the amount of garbage from the household is recycled still in a small number and the only mesuare to tackle this problem that authority should impose the suitable laws. I completely agree with this point and in this essay, I will give some reasons support my ideas.
On the one hand, a leagal requirement is announced will help people know the exactly the amount of waste should be recycled. In other words, some people do not have the information about the recycling rubbish, hence it is hard to build an awareness recycle their waste from homes and recycle it in suitable number. For example, in Vietnam, residents even cannot recognized what type of waste can be recycled, so they invariably disposed them to the gargabe rather than identify and recycle watse.
On the other hand, laws combine with a punishment by money when people cannot recycle enough will directly effect people's pocket. Therefore, they will incerase recycling to the level is required in an active way.
In conclusion, the waste from houshold are needed ehance by a legal requirement is imposed by the government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Duplicated 'the' in the phrase: 'the exactly the'. Did you mean 'exactly the'?
Suggestion: exactly the
...ment is announced will help people know the exactly the amount of waste should be recycled. In ...
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Line 3, column 108, Rule ID: AFFECT_EFFECT[7]
Message: Did you mean 'affect'?
Suggestion: affect
...ple cannot recycle enough will directly effect peoples pocket. Therefore, they will in...
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Line 3, column 195, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in an active way" with adverb for "active"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...rase recycling to the level is required in an active way. In conclusion, the waste from houshol...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
hence, if, so, still, therefore, for example, in conclusion, in other words, it is true, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 1615.20841683 64% => OK
No of words: 208.0 315.596192385 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95673076923 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.79765784423 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.53809273982 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.625 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 332.1 506.74238477 66% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 23.0 20.2975951904 113% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.0811122326 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 114.555555556 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 23.1111111111 20.7667163134 111% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.7777777778 7.06120827912 167% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.399901073566 0.244688304435 163% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148597804276 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0886892209662 0.0667982634062 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.221115178569 0.151304729494 146% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0841263644233 0.056905535591 148% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 48.13 50.2224549098 96% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.3 11.3001002004 109% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.78 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.03 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.2 10.1190380762 111% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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