Some people consider price as most importance thing to consider when buying a product (such as a cell phone) or a service (e.g. medical treatment).
Do you agree or disagree ?
There are many reasons for purchased goods and service in life.
It is argued that price as most importance thing to consider when people buying a product or service or not.
In my opinion, it depends on different situation.
The first reason that customers think price is the key for purchased is better, because of comparison when they prepare to buying something and find it.
First thing they can noticable is price, for example in the mobiles shop sale 3 items that show the sam size, color and type. You can see price for comparison
with yourself before advise for sale person.Apart from comparison, another reason is necessary they should manage money in each month for purchased products or service
such as mobile phone, camera or life insurance. If they know of price of product or service, their should buy it enough money or the lower price. Considering
is easily when product or service their want have discount or promotion.
On the other hand some people considering for purchased a product and service that brand because of good advertisement so famous brand are the big companies
and have many process to presure customers. All people always met name product or service when they want to buy things may be their choose goods and service
that saw or listened by television, radio.In addition to quality,the brand is wellknow have many process to produce and ganruntee with government definily, goods and
service should checked and have good quality before expand to customers.But product or service have defect customer can retrun or refund with agreement.
Whether price or brand is question that can only be answered on a case by case basis. Some people should set their first priority and carefully in order to
hope for the best and must effective outcome.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, may, so, well, apart from, for example, in addition, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 25.0 10.4138276553 240% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1499.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 299.0 315.596192385 95% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.01337792642 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1583189471 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50278086072 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 158.0 176.041082164 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.528428093645 0.561755894193 94% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 468.0 506.74238477 92% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 102.364646404 49.4020404114 207% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 124.916666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.9166666667 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.16666666667 7.06120827912 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 14.0 4.38176352705 320% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.292730071218 0.244688304435 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.12486130564 0.084324248473 148% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.129648395903 0.0667982634062 194% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114277783856 0.151304729494 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.129649279971 0.056905535591 228% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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