Some people work for the same organisation all their working life. Others think it is better to work for different organisations.
Different people have different interests. In the life work some people choose work for the same company all their working life, while other choose work for the different company. In my opinion, this topic is widely open for discussion.
The first reason that some people select to work for the same organisation is better because of environment, they are used to good places and way go to company because they do not have to adjust their lives everyday and they can manage time in the morning as they knows the routs. If they finish work late night. In addition, friends and employer are important in work life. When they stay in the same company foe long time they can increase relationship, because they meet them everyday in working hours and do many activities together. Such as eating lunch, sometime they go to party, shopping after work. Apart from environment another reason is knowledge, when they work the same company for several years have many important information, process, and have connection for discuss in the work when they want to support team, As they cope with process solving skills and decision skill to deal with work
On the other hand some people select work in different organisation is better because of new experience,when they change the company they adapt life for daily, example they meet new work friends, new location or new social, may be they get opportunity work with international company they should learning living on abroad, language skill, or tradition in the country they go. When they change in life may be they can thinks new ideas and improve various skill for work. In addition to opportunities they can earn higher salary than old company and get better position. Of course, they will meet new people as they can have many connection in the social, it may be beneficial for contact with people.
whether working for the same organisation or different is a question that can only be answered or a case by case basis. People should carefully weigh the pros and cons before reaching any conclusion.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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... they do not have to adjust their lives everyday and they can manage time in the morning...
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Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...in the morning as they knows the routs. If they finish work late night. In additio...
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...se relationship, because they meet them everyday in working hours and do many activities...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun information seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much important information', 'a good deal of important information'.
Suggestion: much important information; a good deal of important information
...the same company for several years have many important information, process, and have connection for discu...
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...rk friends, new location or new social, may be they get opportunity work with internat...
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...ernational company they should learning living on abroad, language skill, or tradition...
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Suggestion: maybe
...untry they go. When they change in life may be they can thinks new ideas and improve v...
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Suggestion: think
...hen they change in life may be they can thinks new ideas and improve various skill for...
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Suggestion: many connections
...y will meet new people as they can have many connection in the social, it may be beneficial for...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, if, may, so, while, apart from, in addition, of course, such as, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 348.0 315.596192385 110% => OK
Chars per words: 4.90517241379 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.31911543099 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50010404064 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.485632183908 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 526.5 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 8.0 2.10420841683 380% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 159.496161428 49.4020404114 323% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 121.928571429 106.682146367 114% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.8571428571 20.7667163134 120% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.42857142857 7.06120827912 105% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 5.01903807615 279% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.42491273179 0.244688304435 174% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.184436071337 0.084324248473 219% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162330280034 0.0667982634062 243% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.343479468519 0.151304729494 227% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.166472876737 0.056905535591 293% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 55.58 50.2224549098 111% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.49 12.4159519038 93% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.55 8.58950901804 88% => OK
difficult_words: 60.0 78.4519038076 76% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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