Some people consider that price as the most important thing to think before buying any product such as mobile phone or medical treatment. Agree or disagree.
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It is argued that priority should be given to the money as compared to the thing people want to purchase. I firmly agree to the statement because earning money is a hard nut to crack and can be utilized for other valuable purposes as well.
There is no doubt that it is very tough to make money nowadays. Stiff & cut-throat competition in every sphere has further compelled large chunk of society to think hard before they want to spend it on anything. Burgeoning rate of unemployed people,poverty & inflation has wreaked havoc on the pocket of consumers. Moreover, it depends largely on our grooming as well. For instance, Indians would like to spend less money before they buy anything from simple vegetable to a posh car in comparison with the western counterparts.
Another important point to be noted is that saved money can be used to meet the prerequisite & fundamental demands of a family, in general, and a society,in particular. As such, despite spending 40,000 to buy a branded mobile phone, one can purchase a low rate mobile just in 10 or 12 thousands & can save up-to nearly 30,000 which could be utilized for buying others house-hold items or to give it to the charity. It is not justified to be extravagant just to show off their status or position in the society.it is rightly said that look before you leap. So, there is no harm to think about the price first before we buy anything. The people, who oppose the view, might think that money is nothing when it comes to save our life. But this is far away from the reality. If we look at those standing around food outlets to eat food and doing shopping at the smaller shops, getting treated either by fake doctors or in local hospitals instead of going to five stars hotels,hospitals and shopping malls,it must not be wrong to say that majority of people( nouveaux riches might be an exception) give preference to the price or money.
In conclusion,I would like to reiterate that money is an indispensable & unavoidable part of our life. Therefore,it is not a bad idea to ask for the price before we buy or do anything.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, well, for instance, in conclusion, in general, in particular, no doubt
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 62.0 41.998997996 148% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 8.3376753507 84% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1729.0 1615.20841683 107% => OK
No of words: 367.0 315.596192385 116% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71117166213 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.37689890912 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.69565146322 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 176.041082164 122% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58310626703 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 538.2 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 77.1960774586 49.4020404114 156% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.0625 106.682146367 101% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.9375 20.7667163134 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.3125 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.153347486633 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0454485230184 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0474553226214 0.0667982634062 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0840278364125 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0297124798321 0.056905535591 52% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 57.61 50.2224549098 115% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 12.4159519038 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.21 8.58950901804 96% => OK
difficult_words: 81.0 78.4519038076 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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