People have differing views about children’s schooling. It is considered by some that boarding schools is the best approach for children’s all-round education. However, other section of people argues against the idea. This essay will discuss the debate, and give a concluding view.
On the one hand, those who support the idea of boarding school cite the various benefits this proposal will bring to a child. These range from academic excellence, to being independent and disciplined. For instance, having closure guidance from teachers and continuous study sessions will encourage students to study for long hours might result in improved academic credits. In addition, children staying away from home have to make decision on their own, consequently, make them more independent. Furthermore, strict schedules set by boarding schools have to be followed by children unlikely at home, this will ensure that children become more punctual and disciplined. Thus, Proponents of this view feel that all these factors will add greatly to the children’s all round development.
By contrast, opponents of this view claim that children would lose the emotional contact with their parents. It means that, they spent most of their time in boarding schools therefore have no communication and support from their parents which might have a detrimental effect on their family bonding. Furthermore, all children are not confident enough to stay in school during the term. They would probably suffer isolation, may get prone to homesickness and depression. For these youngsters, boarding schools should not be encouraged.
Overall, it seems to me that boarding school can be a better option for the children’s all-round education. However, it is not an outstanding option as it affects the relation between parents and children and might have an adverse effect on children’s health.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, furthermore, however, if, may, so, therefore, thus, for instance, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.47766323024 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.84617416202 2.80592935109 101% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.587628865979 0.561755894193 105% => OK
syllable_count: 455.4 506.74238477 90% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1917618666 49.4020404114 83% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.7647058824 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.1176470588 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.35294117647 7.06120827912 76% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263140233072 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900864483131 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0659512639322 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.184567491888 0.151304729494 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0643503017376 0.056905535591 113% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.0 9.78957915832 72% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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