Some people feel that designers of newly constructed buildings in big cities should be controlled by government. Others believe this who finance the construction of a building should be free to design it as they fit. Discuss both views and state your opinion.
It is argued that the government should regulate the type of new building designs made by construction companies seen in metropolitan cities. Whereas, others believe that construction companies should build as they like. In my opinion, the government should allow construction industry to build without so much scrutiny because they have the means to and these structures make our city attractive.
Those who say the government should control the type of building styles in cities say so because, some of these structures are usually too tall consequently, interfering with airspace. Aircraft can easily get too close to them or in an awful event come in contact with them. For example, a major man made disaster that happened 10 years ago was due to having too many skyscrapers close to an airport which lead to a passenger plane crashing into one of them, killing a large number of people.
On the contrary, construction companies often generate a lot of money to fund these expensive projects. Therefore, they should be allowed to design it as they wish. More so, these building beautifies our city. They give the city that "mega look" we like and make others want to have a feel of. Also, these structure help to boost the economic growth of a nation by serving as a tourist attraction. To exemplify this, Dubai experiences a major boost in its economy yearly due to the number of tourist visiting places like the Burj Khalifa, which is the tallest building in Dubai and the Dubai rotating tower, to mention a few. Thus, apart from having the means to build them, it can contributed to the economic development of a country.
To conclude, I would like to reiterate that, government should allow the building industries to construct these amazing structures because they define what a mega city is moreover, are affordable by the funders.
- Some people feel that entertainers such as filmt stars, pop music and or sport stars are paid too much moneyDo you agree or disagree 78
- Demand for food is increasing worldwide.What is the cause of this?What measures can the international community take to make sure the supply of food is enough? 73
- Most people believe that stricter punishments should be given for traffic offenses.To what extent do you agree? 73
- Scientists have been warning for many years that to protect the environment, we have to limit the use of energy in our daily lives. Despite warning many people do not pay attention to this.What are the reasons for this and how can people be encouraged to 67
- Some people say that the current level of air travel is acceptable where as other people believe air travel should be reduced and the government should play a role in this Discuss both sides and give your own opinion 87
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ssenger plane crashing into one of them, killing a large number of people. On...
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Message: Specify a number, remove phrase, or simply use 'many' or 'numerous'
Suggestion: many; numerous
...ane crashing into one of them, killing a large number of people. On the contrary, constructi...
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Suggestion:
...mpanies often generate a lot of money to fund these expensive projects. Therefore...
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Message: The verb 'can' requires the base form of the verb: 'contribute'
Suggestion: contribute
... having the means to build them, it can contributed to the economic development of a countr...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, if, look, moreover, so, therefore, thus, whereas, apart from, for example, in my opinion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 24.0651302605 133% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1551.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 310.0 315.596192385 98% => OK
Chars per words: 5.00322580645 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.19604776685 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75365427435 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 176.0 176.041082164 100% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.567741935484 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 486.0 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 59.0050585863 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 110.785714286 106.682146367 104% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.1428571429 20.7667163134 107% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.282104322425 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.108226085193 0.084324248473 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0965448843871 0.0667982634062 145% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.17950599911 0.151304729494 119% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0856022366134 0.056905535591 150% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.2 13.0946893788 101% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 49.15 50.2224549098 98% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.72 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 76.0 78.4519038076 97% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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