Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars, pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money.
Do you agree or disagree?
Which other types of job should be highly paid?
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
You should write at least 250 words.
It is often argued that famous people such as actors, musicians or sports personalities are overpaid. However, from my point of view, this income is worth for their drawbacks. Also, I suppose firefighters should have higher incomes.
From the outside, celebrities appear to be financial and material, however this level of fame also has its problem. Being a public figure means always be pestered by paparazzi. Consequently, this puts an enormous amount of pressure not only on the individuals concerned but also on people around them. As a result, their relationships and family are suffered. Moreover, fame forces them to be a good model role for ordinary people. If they do anything wrong that be dispatched by paparazzi, their future careers will be destroyed and they will be disdained by audiences. Clearly, the outcomes that stem from fame comes out a substantial massive cost.
Additionally, firefighters need to be worthfully paid for their sacrifice. First of all, fire can happen at anytime, when the honk is sounded, they need to be gathered as quickly as possible. This job also requires the concentration, if they are distracted slightly, flames will destroy all the construction and people. Secondly, when they engage in extinguishing the fire, they have to face with the demons. Some of them are even sacrificed themselves when rescuing people. In June, two firefighters died for asphyxiation from saving a family who was stuck in a house on fire. The danger is much too high a price to pay compared with their incomes.
In summary, the rewards from being famous are more than adequate compensation for what celebrities have to give up. Also, people who fight fires need to reap their appropriate rewards for their sacrifice.
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- You should spend about 20 minutes on this task The graphs below show the numbers of male and female workers in 1975 and 1995 in several employment sectors of the Republic of Freedonia Write a report for a university teacher describing the information show 73
- Some people feel that entertainers such as film stars pop musicians or sports stars are paid too much money Do you agree or disagree Which other types of job should be highly paid Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your ow 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, consequently, first, however, if, moreover, second, secondly, so, i suppose, in summary, such as, as a result, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 20.0 13.1623246493 152% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1465.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.12237762238 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.8805778058 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 178.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622377622378 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 452.7 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.3197830311 49.4020404114 51% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 77.1052631579 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0526315789 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.05263157895 7.06120827912 100% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 8.0 3.9879759519 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.145994958519 0.244688304435 60% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0457319206897 0.084324248473 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0315715569922 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0932711363412 0.151304729494 62% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0104462208857 0.056905535591 18% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.47 8.58950901804 99% => OK
difficult_words: 74.0 78.4519038076 94% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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