some people feel that the government should regulate the level of violence for films of television and cinema. others feel that violent films should be not released. Discuss both view and give your opinion.
It is obvious that the topic of violent films is receiving much attention from the public. Some people hold the view that the level of violence for film should be limited properly. Other people think that government should ban violent film production. Both views are justified to some extent but I personally agree with the first view because of several reasons.
There are some causes why people feel that violent films should be not released.Firstly violence actions in film can create mental disturbance for the viewer, sometime they are paranoid about mythical dangers.As the result, they tend to be antisocial and action violently. Besides, violent films have negative impacts on viewers especially children because they cannot perceive right and wrong. Therefore, when children watch violent action on television they will imitate that actions even they find it cool to act like that.
However I think that it is not necessary to ban violent movies production. Because, there are lots of meaningful films that reflect social phenomenons such as law, discrimination, crime,.. including violence actions at acceptable level. these films produced to show people how is real world, which is dangerous but still has people who can make it more beautiful. So action film or violent film play an important role in education people in educating people about dark side of society. Therefore, as long as it regulated the level of violence, the government should allow it produced.
In conclusion, while there is an opinion that the government should ban violent films, I am inclined to believe that the government only should limit the level of violence actions.
Comments
Essay evaluations by e-grader
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Firstly
...at violent films should be not released.Firstly violence actions in film can create men...
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Suggestion: As
...hey are paranoid about mythical dangers.As the result, they tend to be antisocial ...
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Suggestion: However,
...en they find it cool to act like that. However I think that it is not necessary to ban...
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Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
...that it is not necessary to ban violent movies production. Because, there are lots of ...
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...enons such as law, discrimination, crime,.. including violence actions at acceptab...
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Suggestion: .
...nons such as law, discrimination, crime,.. including violence actions at acceptabl...
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Suggestion: Including
...s such as law, discrimination, crime,.. including violence actions at acceptable level. t...
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Suggestion: These
...g violence actions at acceptable level. these films produced to show people how is re...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22471910112 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66555125433 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9090960892 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466713863074 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15669670766 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113109916491 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283258848986 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871240042019 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 2, column 80, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Firstly
...at violent films should be not released.Firstly violence actions in film can create men...
^^^^^^^
Line 2, column 209, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: As
...hey are paranoid about mythical dangers.As the result, they tend to be antisocial ...
^^
Line 3, column 1, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: However,
...en they find it cool to act like that. However I think that it is not necessary to ban...
^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 57, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'movies'' or 'movie's'?
Suggestion: movies'; movie's
...that it is not necessary to ban violent movies production. Because, there are lots of ...
^^^^^^
Line 3, column 131, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...re lots of meaningful films that reflect social phenomenons such as law, discrimi...
^^
Line 3, column 186, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , .
...enons such as law, discrimination, crime,.. including violence actions at acceptab...
^^
Line 3, column 187, Rule ID: DOUBLE_PUNCTUATION
Message: Two consecutive dots
Suggestion: .
...nons such as law, discrimination, crime,.. including violence actions at acceptabl...
^^
Line 3, column 190, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Including
...s such as law, discrimination, crime,.. including violence actions at acceptable level. t...
^^^^^^^^^
Line 3, column 238, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: These
...g violence actions at acceptable level. these films produced to show people how is re...
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, but, first, firstly, however, if, so, still, therefore, while, i think, in conclusion, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 25.0 24.0651302605 104% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1395.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 267.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.22471910112 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.04229324003 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66555125433 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.573033707865 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 424.8 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 52.9090960892 49.4020404114 107% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.6428571429 106.682146367 93% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0714285714 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35714285714 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 5.01903807615 179% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 3.9879759519 276% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.466713863074 0.244688304435 191% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.15669670766 0.084324248473 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.113109916491 0.0667982634062 169% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.283258848986 0.151304729494 187% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0871240042019 0.056905535591 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.7 13.0946893788 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.0 12.4159519038 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.19 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 61.0 78.4519038076 78% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.