Some people feel that the private lives of celebrities should not be openly shared by the media.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the media, there are a flood of news about private life of famous people. Some people are uncomfortable with the media sharing those private stories. Personally, I only partially agree with this opinion.
On the one hand, I also have the feeling that by sharing those personal stories of celebrities, the media has been violating their privacy and wasting space of the media for more significant news. For instance, the disagreement of a couple of actress and actor named Ambers was ignited by a comparision between their careers and fueled further by discussions in the media. As a result, they have divorced though their marriage could have been intact if the media had not involved in. Additionally, there are more crucial information that needs the media to raise their voice such as government’s corruption or people living below the poverty line.
On the other hand, feeding personal stories of famous people to the public is a legal way for news agencies and celebrities themselve to create fame and make more money. There is always a immense demand of their fans to know more about their idols’ private life. That is why detail of everyday life of David Beckham such as what he eats in breakfast and what cars he drives attracts millions of people to follow. Thus, Backham and the youtube channel earns hundreds of thousands of dollars from advertisement.
In short, though I feel unconfortable with personal stories of celebrities, I do not oppose the media to share them. Admittedly, those stories annoy private lives of famous people and waste precious time of the public. However, the media and celebrities might want to feed the public the information and legally get rich from this.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible agreement error. Did you mean 'floods'?
Suggestion: floods
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Line 3, column 232, Rule ID: A_LOT_OF_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun actress seems to be countable; consider using: 'a couple of actresses'.
Suggestion: a couple of actresses
...news. For instance, the disagreement of a couple of actress and actor named Ambers was ignited by a...
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Line 5, column 187, Rule ID: EN_A_VS_AN
Message: Use 'an' instead of 'a' if the following word starts with a vowel sound, e.g. 'an article', 'an hour'
Suggestion: an
...me and make more money. There is always a immense demand of their fans to know mo...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, so, thus, for instance, i feel, in short, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 42.0 41.998997996 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1427.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 286.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98951048951 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11236361783 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.65249143122 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 162.0 176.041082164 92% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.566433566434 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 20.0 20.2975951904 99% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.6683333 49.4020404114 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.928571429 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 20.4285714286 20.7667163134 98% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.14285714286 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.246632535478 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0856796157518 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.063224544078 0.0667982634062 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.159226347933 0.151304729494 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.053472926986 0.056905535591 94% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.0946893788 94% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 51.18 50.2224549098 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.4159519038 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 72.0 78.4519038076 92% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.0 10.1190380762 99% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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