Some people feel that for teachers, going on a course on a particular subject (such as Mathematics, physics, …) is extremely important, while others feel that an excellent teacher cannot be made by only pursuing such a course. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
People hold different views about what factor is the most crucial for teaching staff, there is some argument that taking a course on a specific module is indispensable. However, I firmly believe that teachers also need the pedagogic skills in instituting students.
On one hand, it is undeniable that doing courses in which teachers are taught about the academic subjects that they will embark on in the future. By enrolling those classes, teaching staff can accurately transfer their knowledge to learners. Take an example of Physics, teachers need to take part in physics courses to be knowledgeable about the theories and the methods to carry out experiments in the laboratories, which help them train effectively in professional and well-designed programs for learners.
On the other hand, beside gaining knowledge of a particular module, teachers should also concentrate on the creativity in each lesson. In fact, we are increasingly living in a world that require more creative working environment, but a huge proportion of school boys and girls nowadays find boring and discouraging when being taught by a monotonous teaching method and material. Instead, if teaching staff integrate in-class activities such as puzzles or mini-games, they are more likely to catch learners’ attraction to the teaching program. Therefore, students can absorb knowledge more effectively throughout the exciting and encouraging curriculums.
In conclusion, although participating in a course for the subjects which teachers are going to train is undoubtedly necessary for them, I wholeheartedly agree that trying to create a dynamic and creative lessons for students is another important factor for teaching staff’s success.
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- Since travelling abroad became relatively inexpensive more countries opened their doors for foreign tourists Is it a positive or negative trend Give your opinion and include relevant examples 89
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, so, therefore, well, in conclusion, in fact, such as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 16.0 24.0651302605 66% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1460.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 262.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.57251908397 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.02323427807 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.09705484817 2.80592935109 110% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.614503816794 0.561755894193 109% => OK
syllable_count: 439.2 506.74238477 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 20.2975951904 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 66.4442623558 49.4020404114 134% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.0 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.2 20.7667163134 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.5 7.06120827912 135% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.205358564618 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0728495570387 0.084324248473 86% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0565528344292 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.126739293742 0.151304729494 84% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0375363294497 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.9 13.0946893788 137% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.63 50.2224549098 73% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 14.6 11.3001002004 129% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.32 12.4159519038 123% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.75 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 80.0 78.4519038076 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 10.1190380762 123% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.7795591182 111% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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