Some people find advertisements amusing or annoying and they are not influenced by this when they shop. To what extend do you agree or disagree
some people find commercials entertaining or obnoxious, and they will not let this affect their decisions to buy when they purchase. I totally disagree with this opinion as the bring efficacy recalling to customer’s brains and with the rapid development of social networks, today is far more effective than at any point in the past.
First, the customers’ brain after an amount of time watching the of some new products will recall it when they see that in reality, and this effective repetition leads to the large consumption of whatever gets . Moreover, when this successful attention is verified by the market, enterprises invest a large amount of money in to improve their brand awareness as much as possible which results in the effectiveness of being bigger than in the past. In particular, the clients can eventually be convinced after a long time of listening to the constantly repeated commercial about a particular product.
Nowadays, the rapid development of the internet and social networks provides wonderful backgrounds for brands to make their as it is cheaper and approach more customers than before. In addition, savvy marketers can use the system of analysis from social media which they use to sell their products to identify their clients and then significantly increase the performance of the . Furthermore, the quick improvement of technological devices not only makes the commercials easier to access for customers with colorful pictures and attractive sounds but it also allows unparallel traffic from clients. As the access to the consumers grow, so does the profits. For a classical example, Youtube and Facebook are the best backgrounds for every brand to introduce their new products without any expensive fees
To sum up, always have an impact on the decisions of the customers, whether they recognize it or not as an effective reminder in their memory and the technological devices give a hand in increasing the performance of the . I personally believe that commercials on internet will develop quickly and bring more benefits to everyone.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, furthermore, if, moreover, so, then, in addition, in particular, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1770.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 333.0 315.596192385 106% => OK
Chars per words: 5.31531531532 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.27180144563 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95535564427 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 186.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.558558558559 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 20.2975951904 148% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 78.7863519666 49.4020404114 159% => OK
Chars per sentence: 160.909090909 106.682146367 151% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.2727272727 20.7667163134 146% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.36363636364 7.06120827912 118% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 5.01903807615 379% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.135149984987 0.244688304435 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0552691499872 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.086702566061 0.0667982634062 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0958699664811 0.151304729494 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0797122801053 0.056905535591 140% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 18.8 13.0946893788 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.03 50.2224549098 82% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.17 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.58 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 13.5 9.78957915832 138% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.1190380762 138% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.