In this present scenario, everyone wants to get name and fame in this materialistic world so they take loan from financial institutions but unable to repay it.This essay will throw light on this issues and discuss what prevention should be taken to curb this issue. There are ample of factor responsible to for this problem but the most prominent reason is show off.The most influential age group is teenagers they just imitate the Bollywood stars and try to purchase the same branded clothes to look like heroes.Although,they may wear normal dresses.Moreover,easy availability of credit card to provide the huge amount of loan to debtors are also arises this issue.The most suitable example regarding this obstacle is that banks provides lease facilities to there customers under which customer get the ownership just to pay down payment and rest are fall in instalment Method.For instance; in India some land owner have little land they do not need tractor but they purchase on lease payment method after that due to low production they are not capable to repay it and become bankrupts. Moving towards the solutions, advertisement should be control by censorship so they less elure customers to buy luxury products.Secondly, to create awareness amongst youngsters through camping and motivate them to start own business with the help of loan for productive purposes and drop the useless fashion trends.Government should restrict the easy availability of loan facility on unproductive purposes.At last but not least, small land owner may opt the rent facility rather than to buy tractor to harvest their fields. To recapitulate, this problem is now emerging its roots everywhere, so these solutions are helpful to curb this issues and all preventive measure should be taken into account to reduce the effect of this hazardous practices.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, look, may, moreover, regarding, second, secondly, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 7.30460921844 41% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1544.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.25170068027 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06914319719 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.639455782313 0.561755894193 114% => OK
syllable_count: 477.9 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 16.0721442886 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 73.0 20.2975951904 360% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 239.126012805 49.4020404114 484% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 386.0 106.682146367 362% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 73.5 20.7667163134 354% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 19.25 7.06120827912 273% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 17.0 5.01903807615 339% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.263746826984 0.244688304435 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.160042036948 0.084324248473 190% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0702630593193 0.0667982634062 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.263746826984 0.151304729494 174% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 40.0 13.0946893788 305% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: -2.62 50.2224549098 -5% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 14.6 7.44779559118 196% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 31.8 11.3001002004 281% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 11.39 8.58950901804 133% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 28.5 9.78957915832 291% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 31.2 10.1190380762 308% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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