There are ample of measures to check the growth rate of any economy. Some people suggests that economic progress is the only measure to evaluate the country’s progress.On the other hand others reckon there are other numerous factors to check this like ,infrastructures ,technology and so on.I accord with the later view. First and the foremost is factor is basic amenities which are provided by government to their citizens because if people who live in particular country are happy and satisfied with there basic needs then it assume the country have economically progress .For instance, live in good house,take pension in old age ,better health facilities, earn money for livelihood . In developed countries these facilities are provided by government. Secondly , most crucial cause is technology, if people have good equipment in there workplace then they perform in an effective and efficient manner because with latest technology in science field ,education.centre ,banks, hospitals gave better opportunities to individuals to perform better .After sum up of all such progression it would be conclude whether economy grows or not . To recapitulate, there is no dubedity that economic progress has pivotal role but there are others factors which one country is taken to analyse there growth rate.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, second, secondly, so, then, for instance, in particular, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 7.85571142285 13% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 9.0 24.0651302605 37% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 41.998997996 67% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1097.0 1615.20841683 68% => OK
No of words: 203.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.4039408867 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.77462671648 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.93556095916 2.80592935109 105% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.674876847291 0.561755894193 120% => OK
syllable_count: 359.1 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 16.0721442886 37% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 33.0 20.2975951904 163% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 128.022675943 49.4020404114 259% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 182.833333333 106.682146367 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 33.8333333333 20.7667163134 163% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.0 7.06120827912 212% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 1.0 4.38176352705 23% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 25.0 5.01903807615 498% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.288534983968 0.244688304435 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.13865755982 0.084324248473 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0985966176853 0.0667982634062 148% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.288534983968 0.151304729494 191% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.056905535591 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.9 13.0946893788 160% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 21.06 50.2224549098 42% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.5 11.3001002004 164% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.63 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.17 8.58950901804 118% => OK
difficult_words: 63.0 78.4519038076 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 15.2 10.1190380762 150% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 10.7795591182 176% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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