The assigned bar graph depicted the information about the proportion of population of both sexes in different six nations in 1995 and 2005. To summarise, the highest proportion in population made by male gender in Iceland while the least proportion was observed in New Zealand by end of period of female gender. To initiate with, there were no any significant changes have occurred in both year in the case of male in Australia that were accounted for nearly 55%and 69%while this proportion was half in female gender it stood around 28%and 39%.In Switzerland this trend had changed dramatically for females it ranged from 50%to 70% although, slight increased had seen for male as compare to Australia.The Iceland was highly dense country as compare to all other countries in both years it recorded 70%and 80% female were accounted half of the men. Surprisingly,Uk,New Zealand and USA’s population stagnated to male in 2005 that were70%.Female population were also same for UK and USA in 2005 but it showed one-fourth in New Zealand.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.0 100% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 6.8 103% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 3.15609756098 63% => OK
Pronoun: 8.0 5.60731707317 143% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 32.0 33.7804878049 95% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 3.97073170732 227% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 865.0 965.302439024 90% => OK
No of words: 170.0 196.424390244 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 4.92477711251 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.61087313685 3.73543355544 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.94426308626 2.65546596893 111% => OK
Unique words: 104.0 106.607317073 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.611764705882 0.547539520022 112% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 283.868780488 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.07073170732 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 3.36585365854 89% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 4.0 8.94146341463 45% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 42.0 22.4926829268 187% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 160.833765112 43.030603864 374% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 216.25 112.824112599 192% => OK
Words per sentence: 42.5 22.9334400587 185% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.0 5.23603664747 115% => OK
Paragraphs: 1.0 3.83414634146 26% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0739962271062 0.215688989381 34% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601109196074 0.103423049105 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0627727447784 0.0843802449381 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0739962271062 0.15604864568 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0 0.0819641961636 0% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.8 13.2329268293 180% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 28.85 61.2550243902 47% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 6.51609756098 172% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 19.7 10.3012195122 191% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.13 11.4140731707 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.62 8.06136585366 119% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 40.7170731707 103% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.4329268293 162% => OK
gunning_fog: 18.8 10.9970731707 171% => OK
text_standard: 19.0 11.0658536585 172% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum two paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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