One of the most conspicuous trend of today's world is a colossal upsurge in the number of people believing that few of buyers are get into debt because of purchasing things those are useless for them and out of budget. There are wide range of factor that why it is happen. In this i will discuss some reasons of problem and give some solutions to overcome in following paragraphs.
To commence with, there are deluges of arguments in favor of this stance. The most preponderant one is to use latest model of anything. To elaborate it, whenever any new product is launched in market they want to experience that how good that product is from old model. It can not only contribute to wastage money, but also leads to numerous other disadvantages in various fields. Another pivotal impact of aforementioned proposition is that advertisement.This is because, most people buy things after getting influence from ads of any new product which make individuals mind to buy that product. For instance, a study result published by the government of Australia in March 2014 and April 2016, clear indicates that 30% people buy products after watching ads. Needless to say, all these demerits have far reached impacts on society.
Step to deal with this issue are many. The most effective ones are not remote and complicated but practicable and accessible. The primary one lies in this facts that telling the importance of money. Apart form it, government should organizing awareness among to educate public about drawbacks. Only when convergent efforts from all sector are ensure this problem can be overcome.
To conclude, dealing with these problem of buying products by individuals those are do not need. Although it can be alleviated by collective efforts of both its potential impact are too dire to ignore.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: mind buying
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 53.0 41.998997996 126% => OK
Nominalization: 9.0 8.3376753507 108% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1502.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 4.99003322259 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75266762611 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 187.0 176.041082164 106% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.621262458472 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 478.8 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 49.8037671759 49.4020404114 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.3529411765 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7058823529 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.58823529412 7.06120827912 22% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.01903807615 239% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.280440959493 0.244688304435 115% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0696616884612 0.084324248473 83% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0569144312309 0.0667982634062 85% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.154894131084 0.151304729494 102% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0311811830476 0.056905535591 55% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.9 13.0946893788 83% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.94 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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