Some people with a good education and experience in their field decide to move abroad to work. Why do you think that is? What are the problems caused by this?
Some people with excellent academic qualifications and relevant experience decide to move to other countries to work due to the quality of life and a chance to develop their talent. However, this will cause a lack of talented and the decreased fees in their home country.
To begin with, go abroad is a common trend with lots of people in the world. First, some well-trained employees migrate because of the quality of life in another country is better included: the high salary, the peaceful atmosphere, the clean environment… A clear example is my country – Vietnam. It is 94th on the rank of the happiest country by Global Finance Magazine. While, another country likes Australia, Sweden, The Netherlands are higher. It is not strange why many well-qualified people leave my country. Secondly, the more modern, the better equipment. It is believed that in foreign countries where our very development, the government will try their best to help talented people to work in all ways. For instance, many expert doctors in India move to USA or UK because of a high salary and a good condition to research and develop in their fields in the future.
On the other hand, this trend will cause some problem. If well-qualified people live their country, the country will not make progress in all fields because of a lack of talent. It is said that their home country will become poverty-stricken and underdeveloped. For example, a recent survey found that the number of doctors available in India per million people is a dismal 500, since, in the USA there are 2300 doctors to cater to a population of millions. Furthermore, fees for working will have decreased significantly. For instance, Income tax will decrease if lots of people migrate. So that their home country will face slower economic development at times.
In conclusion, many highly move to other countries for a better opportunity and the quality of life. However, it will cause a brain drain and a shortage of skills and contribution to make some difficulties in their country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 590, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[3]
Message: “So that” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ill decrease if lots of people migrate. So that their home country will face slower eco...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, however, if, second, secondly, so, well, while, for example, for instance, in conclusion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 22.0 24.0651302605 91% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 41.998997996 114% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 8.3376753507 132% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1707.0 1615.20841683 106% => OK
No of words: 343.0 315.596192385 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97667638484 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.30351707066 4.20363070211 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87384598172 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.495626822157 0.561755894193 88% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 531.9 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.3554127183 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.8421052632 106.682146367 84% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.0526315789 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.73684210526 7.06120827912 110% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.240869882259 0.244688304435 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0757905732823 0.084324248473 90% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672676571559 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165577032985 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.062725535981 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.1 13.0946893788 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.31 12.4159519038 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.17 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 79.0 78.4519038076 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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