Some people live with their parents for a long time. Do the advantages of this outweigh disadvantages?
Many people spend a lot of time living with their parents. Despite some obvious advantages of this trend, I believe that these are outweighed by the disadvantages when you were an adult.
On the one hand, there are a number of major benefits when people live with their parents for a long time. The first positive is that they do not need to cook because their mother will cook for them a lot of delicious and nutritious food. Some people who live without their parents do not have time to cook, so they have to eat out or eat anything convenient for them, such as fast food, takeaway food, etc., but it really harms their health. Another positive effect is that the person living with their parents does not think a lot about economics. Their parents are willing to pay a lot of bills, such as electricity, food and drink, clothes,... Therefore, living with parents spends less money than living without parents.
On the other hand, I believe that the drawbacks are more significant than the advantages when they were adults. First and foremost, people who spend their whole life living with their parents are more likely to be dependent because they get used to thinking their parents will help them and have no idea how to solve this problem. As a result, their lives will become passive without their own opinions. Secondly, they cannot take care of themselves without their parents' help. They are used to having their parents take care of everything, but when living alone, it is difficult to take care of themselves.
In conclusion, I would argue that living with parents for a long time brings more disadvantages than advantages.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, if, really, second, secondly, so, therefore, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 24.0651302605 162% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 34.0 41.998997996 81% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 8.3376753507 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1364.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 284.0 315.596192385 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80281690141 5.12529762239 94% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.10515524023 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.41890901221 2.80592935109 86% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.507042253521 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 414.0 506.74238477 82% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 57.9555022124 49.4020404114 117% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.923076923 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8461538462 20.7667163134 105% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.53846153846 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.515167914969 0.244688304435 211% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.192525234673 0.084324248473 228% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0980014080462 0.0667982634062 147% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.337393683209 0.151304729494 223% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0614038554993 0.056905535591 108% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.0946893788 92% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 50.2224549098 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.4159519038 85% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.85 8.58950901804 80% => OK
difficult_words: 39.0 78.4519038076 50% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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