Some people prefer to buy local products while others prefer international products. To what extent do you agree or disagree?
There is a common thought that foreign manufactured articles are better than inland. I completely disagree with this opinion and think that internal goods have their own intrinsic value and quality.
First of all, I believe that using local products help impulse the economic development of a country. Many prestigious companies and conglomerate have manufactured lots of useful goods with acceptable prices and amazing quality. People from all works of life can access to those products straightforwardly. When we buy inland articles, we can not only help the economy develop inside the country but also help those products spread out all over the world. Take Vinfast’s cars for example, these Vietnamese cars have been exporting to many countries and receive lots of complements of consumers and car specialists. That’s why some companies have excellent reputations.
On the other hand, I do not believe that foreign products are as good as the local. In other words, there is many difficulties in not only buying them from other countries but also getting guarantee. Not everyone can get access to them because of the prices that include lots of imported taxes. For instance, if a product cost 100 dollars in USA, that will be double price when exported to Vietnam and only a few people can pay for it. Thus, it may not suitable and convenient for all people.
In conclusion, whereas many people have a tendency to purchase articles oversea, I do not believe that is a good idea for all and I strongly affirm that using inland manufactured articles has many benefits that can outweigh oversea products.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 100, Rule ID: THERE_S_MANY[4]
Message: Did you mean 'there are many difficulties'?
Suggestion: there are many difficulties
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, may, so, thus, whereas, for example, for instance, in conclusion, first of all, in other words, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 41.998997996 60% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1349.0 1615.20841683 84% => OK
No of words: 266.0 315.596192385 84% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.07142857143 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.03850299372 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76833947187 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 153.0 176.041082164 87% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.575187969925 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 420.3 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 46.9546568076 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.3571428571 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.64285714286 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.161305625248 0.244688304435 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0619459959822 0.084324248473 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0658839023828 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0892646292971 0.151304729494 59% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0477018582916 0.056905535591 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.13 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 68.0 78.4519038076 87% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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