Some people prefer to directly help or support people who need it in the local community, however, others prefer to give money to national or international charities. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
Write at least 250 words.
In this modern and technical world, some communities are still floundering to fulfill their basic needs. In this context, some people believe that direct in-person support to the less-fortunate people is always appreciable, while many others favor the indirect approach through numerous charity foundations. This essay would endeavor to shed some light on the driving forces behind this mentality, followed by my personal opinion.
To begin with, it is an undeniable fact that a few impoverished sections are still lacking the most needed amenities, including health, food, shelter, education, etc. Some well-wishers in the local areas prefer to endorse disadvantaged people after seeing their harrowing situations because they believe in timely support directly for the concerning cause. For instance, some find it easy to help in the form of cooked meals, paying for kids' education and clothing for those who can not afford the same. Hence, stimulating at the local levels with possible support is the target of many people.
Furthermore, It is often suggested that to deal with emerging global problems, some eminent foundations can play a pivotal role in gobbling up the same. Despite most common problems, unprecedented times, or some dire situations demand help at a larger scale, which is impossible without these established charity organizations. In addition, besides covering a small sector, the support can be spread out to cover a larger area. For example, Operation smile is one such organization that encourages people to donate to poor children's face surgeries. So, these support systems have become an indispensable part of today's world.
To conclude, it is erroneous to say that one should follow one particular approach only. However, in my opinion, a helping hand from any source is highly synonymous with the development of a better and healthy society.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 414, Rule ID: PERSONAL_OPINION_FRIENDSHIP[1]
Message: Use simply 'opinion'.
Suggestion: opinion
...s behind this mentality, followed by my personal opinion. To begin with, it is an undeniable ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
besides, furthermore, hence, however, so, still, well, while, for example, for instance, in addition, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 10.4138276553 38% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 24.0651302605 83% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1595.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.42517006803 5.12529762239 106% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.85749309483 2.80592935109 102% => OK
Unique words: 196.0 176.041082164 111% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.666666666667 0.561755894193 119% => OK
syllable_count: 495.9 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 38.536028729 49.4020404114 78% => OK
Chars per sentence: 113.928571429 106.682146367 107% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201263265875 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0583932361277 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0500822787716 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.104217484706 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0491374268636 0.056905535591 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 41.7 50.2224549098 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.21 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.83 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 96.0 78.4519038076 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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