Some people prefer shopping in shopping centers while others prefer local markets. What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer?
It has been recently stated that although shopping malls have become popular with consumers, some of them still go to local markets. On one hand, convenience is one of the attractive features of shopping centers. On the other hand, local markets have distinctive characteristics that cannot be found elsewhere.
In terms of the shopping experience, one argument in support of shopping centers is feasibility. We must admit that not only does everything stay under the same roof, but the products are also categorized into aisles, which helps customers find what they are looking for. For instance, there are various large signs indicating whether foods or appliances or clothing is being sold in that area. Moreover, compared to markets, because malls close at a later time in the evening, time is not a limiting factor and consumers can do their grocery shopping during the day as well as the night. If buyers prefer payment methods other than cash, shopping centers and supermarkets also accept credit cards and digital wallets.
Nonetheless, local markets offer several positive aspects that make not a few people shop there. It cannot be denied that since markets only operate until early afternoon, all of the foodstuffs and vegetables come directly from the farms. As a result, unlike food that is frozen as supermarkets, the ones here are fresh and might be a preference of consumers. Besides, the average price of market goods is always less expensive due to the fact that there is less regulation by the government. Another plus point for budgets is the possibility to negotiate the cost, allowing maximal saving.
In conclusion, both shopping centers and local markets provide their own benefits and give shoppers more options. From a personal perspective, despite the freshness of market produce, I am attracted to the open large space that is air-conditioned in malls, especially in such a hot tropical country like Vietnam.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 173, Rule ID: ALL_OF_THE[1]
Message: Simply use 'all the'.
Suggestion: all the
...ets only operate until early afternoon, all of the foodstuffs and vegetables come directly...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, if, look, moreover, nonetheless, so, still, well, for instance, in conclusion, as a result, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 18.0 13.1623246493 137% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1631.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 315.0 315.596192385 100% => OK
Chars per words: 5.17777777778 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.21286593061 4.20363070211 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.75557384238 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 208.0 176.041082164 118% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660317460317 0.561755894193 118% => OK
syllable_count: 508.5 506.74238477 100% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 34.7744478349 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 108.733333333 106.682146367 102% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.0 20.7667163134 101% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.4 7.06120827912 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.326036256831 0.244688304435 133% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0932629321731 0.084324248473 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0775904172067 0.0667982634062 116% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.16998007043 0.151304729494 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0471331797921 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.5 13.0946893788 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.16 50.2224549098 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.5 11.3001002004 102% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.76 12.4159519038 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.14 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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