Some people prefer shopping in shopping centers while others prefer local markets What are the advantages of each? Which shopping experience do you prefer
For each family, shopping is an activity that is extremely necessary and also no less “stress”. Some people prefer shopping in shopping centers while others prefer local markets. I believe that each form has its benefits.
Shopping at the mall has become increasingly popular in all ages. What are the advantages of shopping centers? Firstly, it will help you to save time and money. Compared to having to move multiple places at the same time to make a purchase, the mall is a combination of all the goods you need. It would be the shelves of goods being arranged by categories that allow us to look for what we need easily. Thanks to this, shopping in the mall is very convenient, which saves your time and travel costs a lot more. In addition, the origin of the product is clear and guaranteed. The origin of the goods must be clearly stated by the law. Finally, the trade center is equipped with modern technology and quality services. For example, a stable and cool temperature is convenient for shopping, or a security system is well guaranteed.
On the other hand, local markets are a fairly common type of commerce in our country. The first benefit of local markets is that market-goers can compromise the price to find the most affordable one for their finances. The price in local markets is usually cheaper than the price in supermarkets. Besides, not the same as frozen food of the shopping center as well as the supermarket, food from the traditional market is selected freshly from the farm and only sale of the day. Finally, commodity diversity is also one of the benefits of the market, a product that can be sold in many stores. Therefore, we can consider the quality and price should buy or not.
In conclusion, considering the advantages of shopping in the malls and the local markets, I think that both of the shopping locations are equally effective and equally meet my needs. Both forms have benefits and their own strengths, depending on the shopping needs of each person that they choose an appropriate form.
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, finally, first, firstly, look, so, therefore, well, while, for example, i think, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1687.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.7790368272 5.12529762239 93% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64522196407 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 192.0 176.041082164 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.543909348442 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 525.6 506.74238477 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 5.43587174349 92% => OK
Article: 8.0 2.52805611222 316% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 21.0 16.0721442886 131% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 39.2480338777 49.4020404114 79% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.3333333333 106.682146367 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8095238095 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.28571428571 7.06120827912 103% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 15.0 8.67935871743 173% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.385834920334 0.244688304435 158% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.10707399113 0.084324248473 127% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.162850425845 0.0667982634062 244% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.243185702488 0.151304729494 161% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.154762988812 0.056905535591 272% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.4159519038 82% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.1 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 82.0 78.4519038076 105% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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