Some of people prefer to spend their lifes doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Practicing the same activities and refraining to do something new are preferred by several people. Others, nevertheless, think that one of the good things in life is to alter our previous habit. In according to this issue, this essay will explain both points of view.
As an endeavour to keep doing the similar routine and refraining new experiences, numerous masses consider that it is better for staying at their comfort zone rather than change it to a new one. There are three reasons of this argument. First and foremost, those individuals feel afraid to face a bad experience which possibly happens if they do a new thing. Second but not less crucial, those masses are inactive and captivated to try some things that they have previously never done. Last but not least, all of them are too enjoying their current activity which is, in the end, making them merely staying at their position.
Nonetheless, the other people would rather do a new experience instead of practicing the same routine. These individuals also have their own reasons. They, firstly, have an enormous curiosity about new things. Secondly, these masses are too fascinated to go and feel new experiences and conditions. They, lastly, simply want to go out of their comfort zone because they used to learn something from this activity. Thus, they determined to try something that they have never done.
By way of conclusion, I do appreciate the opposing view which preferred to keep the same routines. Nevertheless, in my perspective, an endeavour to go out of comfort zone is the best decision for every person who wants to find the real personality of themselves because all of us are going to find countless precious things such as meeting various people from different background, facing unexpected occurrence and learning how to struggle in new circumstances.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, lastly, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, thus, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1543.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.05901639344 5.12529762239 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77806511697 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 175.0 176.041082164 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573770491803 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 470.7 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 73.9750802636 49.4020404114 150% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.4375 106.682146367 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.3125 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.201208800145 0.244688304435 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0649634322394 0.084324248473 77% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0664295820787 0.0667982634062 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.130069457798 0.151304729494 86% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0600576028173 0.056905535591 106% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.9 13.0946893788 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 50.2224549098 121% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.15 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 69.0 78.4519038076 88% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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