Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, However, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your opinion.
Some of us, prefer to stick to our daily routine, while, others are eager to experience new things in their life. Although, it is really hard to change the stablished way of life, I believe that it is inevitable for moving forward in our life.
On the one hand, many think that, all aspect of change should be prevented. By disrupting their comfort zone, they feel insecure and anxious. These feeling act as an obstacle to accept any change. Furthermore, they argue that thriving in life and work is derived from stable environment and mind. Generally, they are afraid of changing their career and are loyal to their companies. They may dwell for a long time in one place unless they forced to move. They believe that making decision in uncertain condition may result in irreparable damages.
On the other hand, some people prefer to experience different aspects of life by taking risk of new phenomenon. They believe in their dream and argue that it is worth to accept somehow dramatic change for reaching big goal. For these people getting into a rut leads to life dissatisfaction. These traits are identical in entrepreneurs, inventors, thrill-seekers who put their life into danger for fun. Doing awkward things gives them a sense of pleasure that could not be achieved in other aspects of life.
In my opinion human being would not survive unless by accepting change and moving toward unknown. So we have to put off fear of defeat and taking risk to reach the better life.
In conclusion, although some people try to maintain status que, some game-changer moving toward their dream by taking risk of immense change, and move from convenient situation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, while, in conclusion, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 47.0 41.998997996 112% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1392.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93617021277 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.5913155446 2.80592935109 92% => OK
Unique words: 163.0 176.041082164 93% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.578014184397 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 425.7 506.74238477 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.5111524346 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 81.8823529412 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5882352941 20.7667163134 80% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.52941176471 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 9.0 3.9879759519 226% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179788887414 0.244688304435 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586844662842 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0434389553872 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0976957059651 0.151304729494 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0373208505265 0.056905535591 66% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.1 13.0946893788 77% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 63.7 50.2224549098 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 11.3001002004 74% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.08 12.4159519038 89% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.51 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 55.0 78.4519038076 70% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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