Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Practicing the same activities and trying to avoid something new are preferred by several people. Nevertheless, others think that one of the good things in life is to alter our previous habit. This essay will explain both points of view.
As an endeavour to keep doing similar activity and refraining new experiences, numerous masses consider that it is better for them to stay at their comfort zone. There are three reasons of why they desire to keep this routine. First and foremost, those people feel afraid to face a bad experience which possibly happens if they do a new thing. Second but not less crucial, those masses are inactive and captivated to try some things that they have never done before. Last but not least, all of them too in love to their current activity which is ,in the end, making them to stay at their position.
Nonetheless, the other people would rather go to new places and attempt to do any things that they never did. These people also have their own reasons. Firstly, they have an enormous curiosity about new things. Secondly, these masses are too fascinated to go and try new experiences and conditions. Thirdly, they simply want to go out of their comfort zone because they used to learn something from this activity. Therefore, they determined to try something that they have never done.
In my perspective, an endeavour to go out of comfort zone is the best decision for every person if they desire to find the real personality of themselves. I believe by attempting this, all of us are going to find countless precious things such as meeting various people from different background, facing unexpected occurrence and learning how to struggle in new circumstances.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, nevertheless, nonetheless, second, secondly, so, therefore, third, thirdly, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 7.85571142285 25% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1420.0 1615.20841683 88% => OK
No of words: 290.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.89655172414 5.12529762239 96% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.12666770723 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.62081669384 2.80592935109 93% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.58275862069 0.561755894193 104% => OK
syllable_count: 435.6 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 5.43587174349 166% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 45.8696778248 49.4020404114 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 88.75 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.125 20.7667163134 87% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.125 7.06120827912 101% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169985490252 0.244688304435 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0586784458012 0.084324248473 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0554537290087 0.0667982634062 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111370736315 0.151304729494 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.049559525007 0.056905535591 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.84 12.4159519038 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.91 8.58950901804 92% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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