Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
During our life, people face numerous challenges and have to make important decisions. There are the ones who believe that it is more beneficial to live always performing the same role and executing the same activities. On the other hand, there are others who prefer challenges and changes. In my way of thinking, whilst I feel that both perspectives might have positive points, I prefer to take some risks in order to improve some aspects of my life.
There are some who argue that they prefer to spend a life doing the same things. While having the same profession, or working on the same company for an undetermined period of time, one seldom surpass their comfort zone. For instance, that person knows what kind of emotion to expect from that job, and what exactly they are supposed to act. Moreover, those also enjoy spending their free time executing activities which they know what type of award or pleasure will come from doing them. It can be positive for some who prefer stability instead of adventure. Furthermore, they might predict what the future will look like. As far as I am concerned, that type of routine might be utterly monotonous.
Conversely, there are others who advocate that changes are beneficial. In my perspective challenges might lead us to improve our behaviour, as also as learn how to cope with several unexpected situations. By leaving our comfort zone, we are exposing ourselves to numerous stimuli, which might reveal our curiosity, as well as lead us to discover new talents and vocations. To illustrate this idea, the example of workers who frequently change their job can be given. These switches lead them to try different areas of interest, therefore, they might find what they really enjoy doing. Additionally, explorers who travel the world, experience several distinct beliefs and customs, might have their creativity more stimulated and also became open-minded.
In conclusion, while I feel that both views have effective arguments, I believe that changes can always be beneficial. When someone tries novel things, explores unknown places or applies for a different job, several opportunities became available, enabling them to fulfil their potential.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 167, Rule ID: PERIOD_OF_TIME[1]
Message: Use simply 'period'.
Suggestion: period
...on the same company for an undetermined period of time, one seldom surpass their comfort zone....
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, conversely, furthermore, if, look, moreover, really, so, therefore, well, while, for instance, i feel, in conclusion, kind of, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 12.0 7.85571142285 153% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 19.0 7.30460921844 260% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 44.0 24.0651302605 183% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 41.998997996 83% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1847.0 1615.20841683 114% => OK
No of words: 359.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.14484679666 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35284910392 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68055162882 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 205.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.571030640669 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 586.8 506.74238477 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.6065401419 49.4020404114 74% => OK
Chars per sentence: 97.2105263158 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.8947368421 20.7667163134 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.52631578947 7.06120827912 121% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.186584069775 0.244688304435 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0628487836997 0.084324248473 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0601468561342 0.0667982634062 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.111058718921 0.151304729494 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.038284445047 0.056905535591 67% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.2 13.0946893788 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.53 12.4159519038 101% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.36 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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