Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoiding change. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.
The world is a mixture of many people. People always have a different view for different scenarios. Many people prefer monotonous life whereas, many of them opt for enhancing and changing their lives. People have their own way to sustain in this world.
Many people want to settle on a stable and peaceful life. Moreover, some people do not like many ups and downs in their routine so they like to spend time in a definite way. Furthermore, this way of life is more easy and enjoyable. In this path, it is comparatively easy from fluctuating life in terms of planning and executing it. For instance, people living in the countryside may not prefer to change their routine. Thus they possess more serene life and it is also observed that this way of living has more positive effect on people's life.
On the other hand, majority of the people want to change and enhance their life. Each and every second, some innovation or invention has occurred. To become a successful person, he/she has to change their perspective to live a life. Since living a same and monotonous life will not bring any change from ongoing problems. For example, Elon Musk, CEO of Tesla, SpaceX and Paypal is considered as a maverick in the market. He has always tried to update and boost his knowledge, even after becoming rich and successful. As a result of this attitude, he can introduce new technologies in the world.
I strongly believe that change is the only constant thing in this world. The person has to opt for necessary changes to make his/her life better.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Consider replacing "in a definite way" with adverb for "definite"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...heir routine so they like to spend time in a definite way. Furthermore, this way of life is more ...
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Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...ay not prefer to change their routine. Thus they possess more serene life and it is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, may, moreover, second, so, thus, whereas, as to, for example, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 13.1623246493 46% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1280.0 1615.20841683 79% => OK
No of words: 270.0 315.596192385 86% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.74074074074 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.05360046442 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.51447387641 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 146.0 176.041082164 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.540740740741 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 412.2 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 21.7896008133 49.4020404114 44% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 67.3684210526 106.682146367 63% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2105263158 20.7667163134 68% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.78947368421 7.06120827912 96% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 8.67935871743 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.4128256513 205% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.193580224077 0.244688304435 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0641929832958 0.084324248473 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0520785509599 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124382237284 0.151304729494 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0192025466932 0.056905535591 34% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.0 13.0946893788 61% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 65.73 50.2224549098 131% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.6 11.3001002004 67% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.62 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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