Some people prefer to spend their lives doing the same things and avoid changing. Others, however, think that change is always a good thing.
Discuss both these views and give your own opinion
Some people have a tendency to have a settled life with the same things and do not want to change anything in their daily activities. However, it is believed that change is always a good thing that people ought to try in their lives. In my opinion, change is a way to help us define our lives and find interesting things in life.
On the one hand, changes are sometimes frightening to some people who do not want to risk anything. People are afraid of change because they do not want to alter the things that happen every day in their lives. By virtue of their daily activities make they feel safe and they can control everything easily. When something changes, which makes them feel unsafe, they will find a way to avoid it. Therefore, people are rarely choosing changes in life.
On the other hand, I believed that change is the best path to improve inside and outside of ourselves. Firstly, change help us define our lives. By exploring our world and giving ourselves an opportunity to get more knowledge about the world. From that, we can give a definition of what true life means. For example, some students who graduated from high school spend gap years traveling to a new country to explore new cultures. As a result, they will have more experience, knowledge, and skills than others. Secondly, giving a chance to find interesting things in life are vital. Seeing that we have chances to try in new fields, which we have never tried before and in that journey, you can find some interesting. Hence, not only finding fascinating things but also enriching our brain.
In conclusion, even though some are petrified of change as they want to do the same things every single day, change will assist us to circumscribe and search for the fascinating in life, so we can improve ourselves to be better and better.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, however, if, second, secondly, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, as a result, in my opinion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1503.0 1615.20841683 93% => OK
No of words: 321.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 4.68224299065 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23278547379 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.45081269303 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.523364485981 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 469.8 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.0214524872 49.4020404114 85% => OK
Chars per sentence: 83.5 106.682146367 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8333333333 20.7667163134 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.5 7.06120827912 120% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.315245566137 0.244688304435 129% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.104746339395 0.084324248473 124% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0836011733262 0.0667982634062 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.216478641341 0.151304729494 143% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0949228650183 0.056905535591 167% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.04 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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