Due to the development and rapid expansion of supermarkets in some countries, many small, local businesses are unable to compete. Some people think that the closure of the local business will bring about the death of the local communities
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
Nowadays, an increasing number of supermarkets are extended in some countries and this is a threat to the small local supermarkets. Some argue that if this is lingering, local businesses will close and lead to the end of local communities. Personally, I totally agree with this opinion and I will discuss it in the essay below.
On the one hand, I accept that there are some benefits of the expansion of supermarkets. Supermarkets sell everything and people can buy easily. For example, Costco is one of the big supermarkets in the US that sell everything such as medicines, electronics, furniture, appliances, jewelry, and food. Therefore, if you want to buy many things, you just need to go to the supermarket and buy it in alternative sections. As a result, people can save time. Moreover, supermarkets usually have discounts and things sold there will be cheaper than the local business.
On the other hand, with the development of supermarkets, the local businesses can close and cause the death of local communities. Most of the local businesses are opened by the local residents. Moreover, it is also a place where many residents work. Therefore, when the local businesses have to close due to the extension of supermarkets, it will become a serious issue for residents and communities. One of them is the local people will lose their job and some owners of the local business will lose their big income. Besides, it is a burden for local communities when trying to tackle the unemployment rate.
In conclusion, I believe that the local businesses can face closure and it can affect the local communities, and they should have some measures to let both can develop.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, if, moreover, so, therefore, for example, in conclusion, such as, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 14.0 7.85571142285 178% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 24.0 24.0651302605 100% => OK
Preposition: 31.0 41.998997996 74% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1400.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 282.0 315.596192385 89% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.96453900709 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.09790868904 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98951102998 2.80592935109 107% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 176.041082164 78% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.485815602837 0.561755894193 86% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 450.9 506.74238477 89% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 37.6229235307 49.4020404114 76% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.5 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.625 20.7667163134 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.9375 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.450100465957 0.244688304435 184% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.148820835672 0.084324248473 176% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105087520991 0.0667982634062 157% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.270968061406 0.151304729494 179% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0939061761664 0.056905535591 165% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.0946893788 82% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 50.2224549098 108% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.19 12.4159519038 90% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.67 8.58950901804 89% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 10.7795591182 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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