Some people prefer to work for themselves or own a business. Others prefer to work for an employer. Would you rather be self-employed, work for someone else or own a business? Use specific reasons to explain your choice.
In the job market, there is a great number of paths for seekers to find an appropriate job. Many are of the opinion to be self-employed or own a company, while others concur to work for someone else as an employee. In this essay, I will argue these views and give reasons why I opine that people ought to serve an organization.
To start with, working for yourselves or becoming a founder of a company will be more likely to put people under pressure for managing a budget. Although, you will not be dominated by others and have flexible time, having your own business is likely to be stressful and overwhelming when it comes to finances in general. For example, if you are a founder of a company, you will have to ensure the employee’s monthly income. In bad situations, the economy of your firm goes down, you are unable to guarantee the salary of your workers. Consequently, this will affect your company’s prestige and become your financial burden. Moreover, people who work individually are more likely to put up with unstable salaries. Your wage depends on the revenue of the association. That may lead to the fact your monthly income might be lower.
In contrast, the vast majority believe that working for organizations will bring people a basket full of benefits, and I am not an exception. First off, by working for an employer, your talents in a specific department can be fully appreciated. Indeed, young people who are searching for a well-paid job tend to pick ones that are suitable for their abilities. They prefer finding a job which is defined as a leverage ideology for their future. This will assist them to get a promotion and improve their skills. As a result, people will get motivated to stick to their career paths.
To sum up, owning a business is a preference by some people while others want to work for a big company. For the aforementioned reasons, I am of the same opinion as people who prefer seeking a job in a company since it would promote the social economy.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, if, may, moreover, so, well, while, for example, in contrast, in general, as a result, to start with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 16.0 13.1623246493 122% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 24.0651302605 137% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1657.0 1615.20841683 103% => OK
No of words: 353.0 315.596192385 112% => OK
Chars per words: 4.6940509915 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33454660006 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.72738483322 2.80592935109 97% => OK
Unique words: 190.0 176.041082164 108% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.538243626062 0.561755894193 96% => OK
syllable_count: 531.0 506.74238477 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 11.0 5.43587174349 202% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 31.3074292246 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.2105263158 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.5789473684 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.94736842105 7.06120827912 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.45597146881 0.244688304435 186% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.1315852735 0.084324248473 156% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.110870544394 0.0667982634062 166% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.287201577134 0.151304729494 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0467073208943 0.056905535591 82% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 13.0946893788 76% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 50.2224549098 123% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.42 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 9.78957915832 107% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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