Some people regard the increasing business and cultural contact between countries as a positive development. Others, however, feel these leading to loss of national identities. Discuss both views and give your opinion.
Nowadays, the increasing connection between different nations has promoted the development of globalization. Some people state such progress will trigger some negative consequence like losing national belonging. However, others are holding completely opposite opinions. This essay will argue both of these opinions with several pieces of evidence and conclude my idea in the end.
On the one hand, globalization played an important role in current society. To begin with, the growing global trade is beneficial to the public in financial. For instance, individuals have more opportunities to choose and buy more reliable and good-quality products at a reasonable price. Furthermore, the global village leads to a dramatic understanding of different people from various background. The most well-known example is Australia which as a multicultural nation people are treated friendly and fairly because they understand and respect each other though they may grow in a different culture.
On the other hand, the development of globalization may result in some negative development like the lack of national identity. People who live in a multicultural environment may forget their own culture. That is because on many occasion they have to integrate into local culture in order to make friends and acquire a better employment opportunity. In other words, a sense of national belonging may suffer due to cultural convergence. Foreigners, especially the second-generation immigrant may feel confused because they speak the local language but with a completely different face to the locals.
In conclusion, although the rising connection between nations through more and more international trade and cultural contact may result in a few issues, the benefit that people could obtain is far more than we can image. From my point of view, I strongly agree with the steadily increasing globalization is positive progress.
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population who use the Internet between 1999 and 2009 in three different countries 42
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 225, Rule ID: MANY_NN[1]
Message: Possible agreement error. The noun occasion seems to be countable; consider using: 'many occasions'.
Suggestion: many occasions
...t their own culture. That is because on many occasion they have to integrate into local cultu...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, furthermore, however, if, may, second, so, well, for instance, in conclusion, in other words, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 13.0 24.0651302605 54% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 41.998997996 102% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 8.3376753507 192% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1639.0 1615.20841683 101% => OK
No of words: 291.0 315.596192385 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.6323024055 5.12529762239 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13263368359 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 177.0 176.041082164 101% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.60824742268 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 519.3 506.74238477 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 43.9839725781 49.4020404114 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 102.4375 106.682146367 96% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 20.7667163134 88% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.1875 7.06120827912 116% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.180453975012 0.244688304435 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0541178924442 0.084324248473 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0383034912617 0.0667982634062 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112892788153 0.151304729494 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0545080406522 0.056905535591 96% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.2 13.0946893788 108% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 36.28 50.2224549098 72% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.37 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.2 8.58950901804 107% => OK
difficult_words: 86.0 78.4519038076 110% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.