Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Video games are now more popular than ever, and a wide range of people from all ages and backgrounds are playing them. While many consider video games to have a bad influence on the players, Other, including me, do believe that their benefits far outweigh their drawbacks.
Video games can have positive outcomes on the players in various areas of life. Firstly, video games can help train and develop brain cells in gamers. In the recent few years, many studies have shown that video games can help regular players to develop new connections in their brains, which can help them to increase their analysis powers and improve their fine touch movements. Secondly, video games can be used to deliver various types of information and become a powerful tool in educating the youngsters in a fun and enjoyable way that appeals to their minds. For instance, there have been a huge increase in the number of computer and web developers since the introduction of game by Google called Google blocks, which provides a different approach to learn programming.
On the other hand, some people believe that there are many disadvantages to playing video games. They support their opinion with the fact that video games are, in fact, addicting which as a result might compromise the players’ studies and jobs. It does not stop there, video games can affect people’s health, as well. By taking up most of the players free time they eliminate any chance of people having any physical exercise which might lead to obesity and related health problems. However, while many games can have some adverse effects on the players life, I truly believe that these problems can be solved easily by making a well-structured time table that limits the daily exposure to video games.
In conclusion, while playing video games can have some side effects, I really think that they are easily solvable and that their positives outweigh the negatives.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 765, Rule ID: AFFORD_VBG[1]
Message: This verb is used with infinitive: 'to program', 'to programme'.
Suggestion: to program; to programme
... provides a different approach to learn programming. On the other hand, some people be...
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Line 6, column 557, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'players'' or 'player's'?
Suggestion: players'; player's
...es can have some adverse effects on the players life, I truly believe that these proble...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, however, if, really, second, secondly, so, well, while, for instance, in conclusion, in fact, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 10.0 10.4138276553 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 7.30460921844 178% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 24.0651302605 112% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1620.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 322.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.03105590062 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23607819155 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47464672098 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.555900621118 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 499.5 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 4.0 2.10420841683 190% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 16.0721442886 81% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 24.0 20.2975951904 118% => OK
Sentence length SD: 53.1179328749 49.4020404114 108% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.615384615 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7692307692 20.7667163134 119% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.7692307692 7.06120827912 153% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.67935871743 138% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.405698462463 0.244688304435 166% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.171200969675 0.084324248473 203% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0609684881195 0.0667982634062 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264352210363 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395639005926 0.056905535591 70% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.6 13.0946893788 111% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 50.2224549098 94% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 11.3001002004 112% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.19 12.4159519038 98% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.6 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 77.0 78.4519038076 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 9.0 9.78957915832 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 10.1190380762 115% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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