Video games always regard as a double-edge sword. While many agree that it is a leisure tool to escape from the pressure of life, others think its consequence is incomparable. In my opinion, I believe the harms of games are outstripped by its potential benefits.
There are several reasons why video-games bring negative impacts on player. To begin with, games may be highly addictive or even affect indirectly the surrounding life of the player. Since these games create the virtual world which be full of colors in fascination and new for gamer, it easily stimulates their curiosity to advent and experience. This leads the adverse effects on time that user spend for other activities. For example, many children now prioritize hours each day to play online games, instead of sparing time for studying or experiencing out-door activities. Additionally, the rise in violence in recent years has also been related in part by gaming addicts who frequently exposed the violent images or the criminal behaviors in video-games
However, I am convinced that these disadvantages are eclipsed by foreseeable advantages. Firstly, it may be both entertaining and educational tool. These games not only are a playground to reduce pressure, but also be a source to improve concentration, logical thinking or even problem solving. In developed countries, for example, Video game is one of the subjects in their curriculum. Secondly, playing games makes you rich, numerous professional gamer make money while playing games via some social platforms by streaming, or receive prizes through competitions up to millions of dollars.
In conclusion, it seems to me that if we can use video games appropriately, it will give users incomparably tremendous benefits.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, while, for example, in conclusion, in my opinion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 8.3376753507 60% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1476.0 1615.20841683 91% => OK
No of words: 277.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.3285198556 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07962216107 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.03012199027 2.80592935109 108% => OK
Unique words: 189.0 176.041082164 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.682310469314 0.561755894193 121% => OK
syllable_count: 471.6 506.74238477 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 58.7703937682 49.4020404114 119% => OK
Chars per sentence: 105.428571429 106.682146367 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.7857142857 20.7667163134 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.28571428571 7.06120827912 132% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.334907338559 0.244688304435 137% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.113281749156 0.084324248473 134% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0671707500572 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.197189648156 0.151304729494 130% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0229928947809 0.056905535591 40% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 13.6 13.0946893788 104% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 50.2224549098 87% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 11.3001002004 105% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.63 12.4159519038 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.94 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 94.0 78.4519038076 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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