Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that videos games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
Numerous individuals consider that the video games will render fruitful impacts to people who played it, nevertheless, others contemplate that it provides unfavourable consequences. In accordance with this statement, this essay will explain the upsides which outweigh its downsides.
To begin with, the people, who believed that it is going to produce more beneficial outcomes, think that it is caused by several contributing factors. It, first and foremost, is generated by the system which consisted in temporary tool. According to the instance of prior argument, the society of some nations, who wants to learn other languages such as English or other languages, is able to obtain countless vocabularies of the language that they desire to learn by playing it. Second but not less crucial, it is apparent that it is capable of rendering new opportunities to individuals, who played it, to make earn living by creating a channel on Youtube which showed how to be an excellent player of playing various games, this case mainly occurred in this era.
In regard to disadvantage of it, other persons firmly feel that it will make people, particularly adolescents, being lazy to do other activities and making them addicted to play it. Furthermore, it, ultimately, will produce negative impact for them such as making juveniles acquire a low grade of their examination on their education institution due to the fact that they would rather play games rather than study.
By way of conclusion, it seems to me that the presence of the video games, naturally, will benefit individuals who played it. Thus, in order to create benefits solely, all persons have to control and maintain the use of it, specifically for children.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, furthermore, if, nevertheless, second, so, thus, such as, in regard to, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 13.1623246493 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 17.0 7.30460921844 233% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 35.0 24.0651302605 145% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1448.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 279.0 315.596192385 88% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.18996415771 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.08696624509 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88797712339 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 169.0 176.041082164 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.605734767025 0.561755894193 108% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 62.576752872 49.4020404114 127% => OK
Chars per sentence: 144.8 106.682146367 136% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.9 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.7 7.06120827912 137% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176190691065 0.244688304435 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0688535259031 0.084324248473 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0547718870365 0.0667982634062 82% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.109391427195 0.151304729494 72% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0318880164075 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.0 13.0946893788 130% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.96 8.58950901804 116% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 9.78957915832 117% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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