Some people regard video games as harmless fun, or even as a useful educational tool. Others, however, believe that video games are having an adverse effect on the people who play them. In your opinion, do the drawbacks of video games outweigh the benefits?
In recent years, the popularity of video games is becoming increasingly popular. Some people regard them as harmless and even educational in some perspectives. Others, on the contrary, object to that idea. From my viewpoint, video games are beneficial; however, the disadvantages outweigh the advantages.
It can be seen that playing video games brings numerous positive effects and improve the crucial skills of users. Taking football video games as an example. It’s commonly acknowledged that football is a team sport. However, when playing it through a screen, players not only learn how to collaborate but also have an opportunity to practice critical skills as they have to come up with compatible formations for each specific opponent. Furthermore, any type of sports involves some elements of risk, playing through computers can reduce the possibility of being injured.
Despite the fact that they are beneficial to some extent, the drawbacks of video games still exceed the benefits they bring to. Firstly, spending too much time playing video games can potentially lead to a sedentary lifestyle which detrimentally impacts players’ physical and mental health in the long term. Furthermore, education records might also be affected dramatically when the users overcome challenges or winning over their friends in digital games as the primary priority. In some circumstances, gaming addiction can lead to tragic consequences. It is widely known that one Asian gamer passed away because of playing an online game 48 hours consecutively. Additionally, playing digital games can be extremely expensive. Gaming companies use multiple strategies that attract players to spend money for new missions or upgrading abilities. They have been blamed for their tricks but the government still cannot do anything to stop it.
In conclusion, video games may contain several good sides for the players, the drawbacks still surpass the advantages. Parents must be aware of the downsides of playing video games and have solutions to prevent their children from being addicted to these activities.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, furthermore, however, if, may, so, still, in conclusion, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 21.0 24.0651302605 87% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 8.3376753507 36% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1774.0 1615.20841683 110% => OK
No of words: 323.0 315.596192385 102% => OK
Chars per words: 5.49226006192 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.87855778987 2.80592935109 103% => OK
Unique words: 201.0 176.041082164 114% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.622291021672 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 542.7 506.74238477 107% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 46.3811142194 49.4020404114 94% => OK
Chars per sentence: 93.3684210526 106.682146367 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.0 20.7667163134 82% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.21052631579 7.06120827912 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.419048905266 0.244688304435 171% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.127632255156 0.084324248473 151% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0809563698153 0.0667982634062 121% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.264870917447 0.151304729494 175% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0628442606451 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.9 13.0946893788 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 50.2224549098 91% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 11.3001002004 98% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.27 12.4159519038 115% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 105.0 78.4519038076 134% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 9.78957915832 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.