Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy a thing. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention.
Nowadays millions of companies produce billions of products and the role of advertising is quite obvious. Some people believe that ads are significant in encouraging consumers to purchase for a product, others assume that ads that appear frequently can cause consumers to be less interested in seeing it.
Undoubtedly that commercial functions is to share information about product offerings and ideas, additionally, an advertising it is also a persuasion tool for consumers to buy products that are marketed globally, if this ad is packaged attractively in terms of visualization and creativity that can influence buyers attention to memorize it, also this boost companies to big achievement in marketplace. For example, provider internet firms which promote low-cost services targeted at adolescents, oftenly formed with funny animations along with daily life stories featuring beat rhythms to attract teenagers, and as consequence increase the high sales of their companies, many consumers also being misled by marketing to buying the product even if it's not important.
On the other hand, some people will feel monotonous and neglect more often when the number of views is repetitive. Furthermore, if the ad is based on an exaggerated impression and breaks the promise without considering the quality of the product and careless with the clients. For instance, electronic companies that offer massive discounts, without contemplating safety guarantees for users and not providing good service when the product has a problem, this can lead to decreased sales and untrustworthiness of buyers.
In conclusion, some advertisements have been very successful in influencing consumers and some of them most of the customers are more concerned with the quality of the goods they buy with better assurance.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Vious
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, so, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 10.0 7.30460921844 137% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1453.0 1615.20841683 90% => OK
No of words: 261.0 315.596192385 83% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.56704980843 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0193898071 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.13257698449 2.80592935109 112% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.64367816092 0.561755894193 115% => OK
syllable_count: 448.2 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 5.43587174349 18% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.2975951904 182% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 97.4553796381 49.4020404114 197% => OK
Chars per sentence: 207.571428571 106.682146367 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.2857142857 20.7667163134 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 12.2857142857 7.06120827912 174% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.123830427402 0.244688304435 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609969723351 0.084324248473 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497605456844 0.0667982634062 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0821016506757 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0305275534879 0.056905535591 54% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 23.4 13.0946893788 179% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 25.46 50.2224549098 51% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 18.9 11.3001002004 167% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.62 12.4159519038 126% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 10.19 8.58950901804 119% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 20.5 9.78957915832 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.1190380762 166% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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